d3vilsfire 132 Posted June 16, 2014 Share Posted June 16, 2014 (edited) Hey guys, so I accidently posted my graphic in the wrong thread, and so it wasn't graded. I was wondering if I could still have it count for last week because I did all the work, but just messed up posting it. Decided to have some fun and make a graphic.. please give me feedback.. Also, for some reason the HD didnt come across well at all :/ Edited June 16, 2014 by d3vilsfire Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/9191-claimedkja-graphic/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
d3vilsfire 132 Posted June 16, 2014 Author Share Posted June 16, 2014 Just got home.. fixed the top post. Still hoping y'all will count it towards last week <3 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/9191-claimedkja-graphic/#findComment-84511 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Grumpy Bear 347 Posted June 16, 2014 Share Posted June 16, 2014 Effort: 1/2 - Text, stock work, lighting, I'd say add some lighting and blending and you will earn full marks here Look: 1.75/3 - The stock over the render is just there, no erasing at all, at least get it off his face. The text is bland and this could use some blending and lighting like said above. Try out some tutorials and you'll improve. What program do you use? Creativity: 1/1 - Sure Total: 3.75/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/9191-claimedkja-graphic/#findComment-84542 Share on other sites More sharing options...
d3vilsfire 132 Posted June 16, 2014 Author Share Posted June 16, 2014 Pixelmator.. for some reason the render did not come out as well i had hoped.. Can i count this on last week? Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/9191-claimedkja-graphic/#findComment-84544 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Grumpy Bear 347 Posted June 16, 2014 Share Posted June 16, 2014 I'd ask victor if you can but I don't see why not d3vilsfire 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/9191-claimedkja-graphic/#findComment-84546 Share on other sites More sharing options...
solas 1,951 Posted June 20, 2014 Share Posted June 20, 2014 (edited) Effort: 2/2 - As Bushito said, it is missing lighting and blending...but you're fairly new to graphics, plus it looks like you cut the render yourself so this gets full marks. Look: 1.75/3 - I have to agree with Bash. The stock needs to be erased around the render's face and the text needs work. Also, never put that much info in the text if you're just making a sig. At the most, you should just use the name and team (with the team name as subtext), maybe occasionally the number or position as some very minor/barely visible text. Just look for some tutorials about the basics, I would link you some but I can't seem to find some. Creativity: 1/1 Total: 4.75/6 FINAL GRADE: 4/6 Edited June 20, 2014 by lightning25 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/9191-claimedkja-graphic/#findComment-85576 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smarch 3,153 Posted June 26, 2014 Share Posted June 26, 2014 Claimed Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/9191-claimedkja-graphic/#findComment-86991 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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