Michael Schmitd For Captain

[Kmatt 35]

Hey! I think it is time we talk about the great Michael Schmitd and give some fact's on why he should be the captain for the Yukon Rush, maybe not this season but next season would be great! Michael has been max training and he has been reaching his cap points each week, of 12. Now, I know he is not the best player on the team, so your probably saying, "why does he deserve captain?". Well, the answer is that he is loyal and is grinding to make it to the Vancouver Wolves official roster, and take home another championship with them! Michael has been very consistent with getting his points, if he does not score he will get at least like 2-3 assists per game. Michael, right at the start was very consistent this season, and he even got a few game winning goals, but then he was sent down to line 3 which really stopped him from scoring goals. Michael currently has 13 games played, with 6 goals and 9 assists! Which also gives him a total of 15 points, and he is averaging 1 point per game, at the moment. The Vancouver Wolves are doing way better then what his minors league team is doing. Well, they are both kind of in the same position in the standings, which is not that good, Though the season just started, we can all hope to get some better results for the defending championship team, the Wolves! You might think it is weird that both of these good teams, including the championship team, defending championship team in the VHL, is doing worse this season. The Vancouver wolves are 7-7, At least they are even and do not have more loses then wins, though that can change in the next upcoming sim. Michael is expecting to get called up to the VHL within the next 2 seasons, but wants to get called up in one! Michael is looking to get back on track and start scoring goals again every game, and go for his first hat trick in his next game, that would be cool and make him so happy. The Vancouver Wolves and the Yukon Rush need to bounce back in there next sim, and start taking home some wins if they want to make the playoffs this season. Oh no, Michael is walking down his stairs and sees a bunch of presents for Christmas, he wants to open one so bad! What should he do?? Michael will be preparing his home for Christmas within the next of couple of days! Do you guys have any plans for Christmas? If so what kind of plans do you have? Michael will be eating a big meal with his family at home, some turkey, mashed potato's and gravy and some stuffing and then for desert he will have some fruit bowls, some strawberry, and root barb pie! Michael will not be going to crazy with sugar though, because he is still a hockey player and needs to be a healthy player!

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[Hoopydog 195]

I like the way that this piece is written. You give the reader some nice background information on both your player and both the team he is on, and the team he hopes to play for next season. Including the little anecdote at the end to do with Christmas is a nice touch and brings some humour to the media spot. One thing to keep in mind for next time is to maybe break up the piece in to smaller paragraphs to make it easier to read and digest. Overall though, nice job

 

7/10

[fromtheinside 1,290]

lol love the article KMatt, honestly if you are back next season, you absolutely should be considered for the C. You're having a great season.

[Gally 61]

Review: You sure make a good case for Michael to become captain, I like it. The push to the VHL isn't an easy one, so if you stay dedicated you can pull it off. My one suggestion is to make it into a couple of paragraphs instead of just a cluster of words, but other than that, good job.

8/10