Hooperorama 126 Posted January 11, 2021 Share Posted January 11, 2021 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/97699-l/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
solas 1,951 Posted January 18, 2021 Share Posted January 18, 2021 This is pretty good! I can see you've definitely got some good stuff going on here. I like the soft stock work and the lighting looks nice too, especially the light behind the player's head creates a nice effect. I like the colors, too, I think the sig mostly looks consistent and well-blended. I do have some criticism, though. First off I feel like the render could be placed a little bit better. I don't like the empty space above the head, it makes the sig look unbalanced to me. And I think it would look better if the player wasn't in the dead center. The text could also use some work - it almost seems like you made the sig and then added the text on top. The text could maybe be placed a bit closer to the middle of the sig, and possibly moved down below the stock work so it blends better with the rest of the sig. All in all, I can definitely tell you have some graphical ability and I think the next step is just to combine that with better composition. 8/10 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/97699-l/#findComment-815513 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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