CharaZardd7 11 Posted April 16, 2021 Share Posted April 16, 2021 diacope and Mrpenguin30 2 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/102079-lol-not-bad-for-my-first-try/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
GreenGato 101 Posted April 19, 2021 Share Posted April 19, 2021 Review: Not bad at all for a first signature! I always appreciate a logo swap and the player cutout is a pretty clean. The background is fun and the effects you added are fitting. I think that you could put less emphasis on the text a bit more on the player. A high-resolution player would really bring this together. I like the layering but it does feel a bit like the right half of the sig is empty. Some small tweaking and this would be right at home as anyone's signature. Keep at it! 7.8/10 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/102079-lol-not-bad-for-my-first-try/#findComment-840618 Share on other sites More sharing options...
dlamb 1,326 Posted April 19, 2021 Share Posted April 19, 2021 Echoing what is said above, try and use higher quality renders, as it is one of the easiest things you can do to up the quality of your overall sig. Definitely not bad at all for a first attempt, I would like to see you play around with gradients/textures to really liven up the background. Text may be slightly on the large side, but I don't hate it, especially with such a long last name. Another tip I usually stick to is don't show the bottom of the player's feet, as it makes them seem more in the background than up front. I'm not a god by any means, but this is a very solid first sig and I am excited to see what you can do in the future. 6.9/10 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/102079-lol-not-bad-for-my-first-try/#findComment-840670 Share on other sites More sharing options...
v.2 1,406 Posted April 19, 2021 Share Posted April 19, 2021 Great first attempt. The fundamentals are there and I like that you even went for a jersey change on the render, which most beginners shy away from. I think this would look way better if it were smaller (at least 1/2 the size). Also the text placement is a bit overpowering as it takes up the full bottom of the sig. For the amount of space there is I think the render placement and sizing is a little awkward as well. The red theme is great, and I dig the abstract smokiness you went for with the background. Only room to improve from here on out! Feel free to ask any graphics related questions in the discord. Overall rating: 5/10 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/102079-lol-not-bad-for-my-first-try/#findComment-840671 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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