Ledge 1,131 Posted August 28, 2021 Share Posted August 28, 2021 (edited) Well, the four I'm currently deciding on Smolder Bravestone Rhett Wulfstone Massimo Cortier Ronan Kellerman LMK which name and render is da best in da comments below Edited August 28, 2021 by Ledge and Dairy diacope 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/107424-da-recreate-names/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
N0HBDY 1,132 Posted August 28, 2021 Share Posted August 28, 2021 Holy shit there's a lot going on in that graphic. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/107424-da-recreate-names/#findComment-868738 Share on other sites More sharing options...
N0HBDY 1,132 Posted August 28, 2021 Share Posted August 28, 2021 Whelp you posted it here so I guess that makes it subject to review. Your skill to make graphics is good and I get that you’re looking for input on who you think should be your next player. But the graphic in general is kind of a mess. The colors are everywhere and it’s really difficult to notice the “legacy” you put in the middle of it. I would recommend that instead of mashing all of them together you put them into a grid form so that way it’s easier to distinguish everything. Overall 6/10 Ledge 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/107424-da-recreate-names/#findComment-868747 Share on other sites More sharing options...
diacope 1,696 Posted August 28, 2021 Share Posted August 28, 2021 (edited) I feel like all of these are different personality names for you Don't fuck around Ledge, Tired don't fuck around Ledge, Funny don't fuck around Ledge and Hardworking Ledge Getting a lot better Edited August 28, 2021 by 16z Ledge 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/107424-da-recreate-names/#findComment-868748 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ledge 1,131 Posted August 28, 2021 Author Share Posted August 28, 2021 31 minutes ago, N0HBDY said: Whelp you posted it here so I guess that makes it subject to review. Your skill to make graphics is good and I get that you’re looking for input on who you think should be your next player. But the graphic in general is kind of a mess. The colors are everywhere and it’s really difficult to notice the “legacy” you put in the middle of it. I would recommend that instead of mashing all of them together you put them into a grid form so that way it’s easier to distinguish everything. Overall 6/10 Appreciate the input N0HBDY 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/107424-da-recreate-names/#findComment-868755 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr Bohannan 130 Posted August 28, 2021 Share Posted August 28, 2021 Dang, your piece is very "colourful"! Let's start with the fact that from what I understand it is made for 4 players, but for some reason you have 6 players there which idk who the other two are as you have pointed out the other 4 with their names above their heads. Speaking about the texts - the "LEGACY" is very hard to spot. I went over the picture like 3-4 times and only then only realized the text was there. I cannot say nothing about the style you have chosen to do this graphic as that is your own personal preference, but if you do "renders" or "cutouts" and it is super obvious how it is cut out and you can see the edges, then make sure you get rid of that with a soft eraser or something, so it blends with the background instead of being just a cut square around the players head. My Rating: 6/10 Ledge 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/107424-da-recreate-names/#findComment-868776 Share on other sites More sharing options...
v.2 1,412 Posted August 28, 2021 Share Posted August 28, 2021 Ronan Cortier Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/107424-da-recreate-names/#findComment-868794 Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigAL 2,176 Posted August 28, 2021 Share Posted August 28, 2021 Ledge 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/107424-da-recreate-names/#findComment-868811 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vat 234 Posted August 29, 2021 Share Posted August 29, 2021 Review: If I'm going to be honest i'm not a big fan of this one, it looks messy with large variety of colors and the names. The renders are too clumped up IMO. I dont get why there are 6 players and only 4 names, it could be that if there weren't any players in the background it would look empt but instead I would put other stuff there for example a stand filled with fans or other hockey related stuff. The extra color stuff on the top of Bravestone, Wulfstone and Kellerman's head is cutoff, if you would be able to at least round it off in someway that would be great. 6/10 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/107424-da-recreate-names/#findComment-869264 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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