Making History

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Omi Aberg this season has had a record-breaking season, because as a part of the Stockholm Vikings team he got 121 points in 72 games and had the most points in the league, and will go down in history as the first league's points leader. Together with Zach Kisslinger II teared the league up, Kisslinger got 111 points and Aberg 121.  Aberg also picked up 48 goals, which put him as tied 1st place in goals in the league, and even on assists, Omi Aberg finished the regular season with 73 assists and 3rd most assists in the league. Aberg has been really consistent and led the team together with Kisslinger to the VHLE playoffs as the 1st seed. Aberg can be very proud of his game and his teammates because Stockholm will go down in the league's history.

But right now regular season is no longer in the heads of Stockholm Vikings players. They got bigger fish in mind - the VHLE playoffs and they are already underway. In the first round Stockholm Vikings are facing off against Vasteras Iron Eagles, another historic team in the whole VHL, but after dominant regular season it was expected that these series would be a walk in the park for Vikings, but after leading the series 2-0, Iron Eagles have found some kind of power and have climbed and fought back to tie the series up. Now the next game is going to be really important for both of the teams because the team that wins the next game is going to have a mental boost going into game 6 and it wouldn't be surprising to see if these teams go all the way to 7 games. One thing that has been pretty disappointing in the playoffs is how Aberg plays because his scoring is way down from his regular-season numbers. It's still good, but it's not comparable to the regular season where he had record-breaking numbers, mostly because it's the first season and all records are made from the start.  But there shouldn't be a reason to worry about it, these last 2 games were not the best for Stockholm Vikings leaders Aberg and Kisslinger but now they will be really motivated. Aberg already won the VHLM championship and if he will win the VHLE championship too, the only championship to win for the old youngster from Islands will be the big one VHL championship.

 

Omi Aberg has a chance to go down in history and his dream may end in the first round of the playoffs, but one thing is for sure - Aberg won't stop until he has won this championship and is going to be the hardest working player on the rink, just like he did when he played in Miami - he didn't give up and fought and fought until he won the championship and was able to get crowned as champion. One thing that motivates Omi Aberg is being the best, he wants to be better than his teammates, enemies, and other players. He will not stop until he is the best.

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REVIEW

 

Interesting article. I really liked the second paragraph in particular - you went into depth and beyond just stats there. Some of your sentences run on a bit (a lot of "and"). I didn't really like how you just listed stats in the first paragraph for a bunch of sentences, but other than that it was very solid. Nice work. 7/10

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review: I wasn't aware of how good your player was doing but this is awesome to see, and your player will be remembered forever!! On a more serious topic though this was a fun post to read through, I think you have good pacing and spacing here and the picture is great although I believe you've used it before XD. I think you found a good balance with the stats and numbers vs text and words, in that it's not a stat dump and there is enough there to break it up. I think the second paragraph is a little long, maybe could have broken it up into four pieces but still very good. 8/10