Torq in Seattle

[Steve 1,920]

[Shindigs 1,771]

As always your work is the most fun to review. Because of how different your style is to everyone else on the site. With this one you again managed to surprise me by going for a comic book style. I'm not going to lie. It was probably the last thing I expected when I clicked on the thread. But it just works.

 

In keeping with my tradition when it comes to sigs. I'd have loved the "SEATTLE BEARS DEFENSEMAN" part of the text to have ever so slightly better readability. I mean it's perfectly readable, but within the comic book aesthetic I kind of expect the text to "pop" a bit more. As it has such an important role in the genre. Potentially implementing something like talk bubbles behind the text could have further cemented the comic book feel (assuming that was what you actually wanted to go for, and that I'm not just misinterpreting). While also fixing the readability issue.

 

Other than that I do really love it, and the choice of render is great. It comes across as very intense and draws your eyes to the visor with all the visual interest going on there. That's something I always really struggle with, trying to guide the eyes of the viewer to what matters.