Hogan 1,425 Posted April 17, 2022 Share Posted April 17, 2022 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/120048-6-tpe/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
N0HBDY 1,128 Posted April 18, 2022 Share Posted April 18, 2022 The color scheme of this graphic works really well, the background is unique for sure but fits the colors otherwise for brick I'd probably use a goalie for obvious reasons. A logo swap for this jersey might not be to hard since their logos are relatively similar and the text for the players I feel should both be level and Li's centered. So once you fix all those things you'll have a solid 9/10 graphic but i'm going to rate this overall 7/10 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/120048-6-tpe/#findComment-921872 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gaikoku-hito 2,132 Posted April 18, 2022 Share Posted April 18, 2022 Review: Overall the white brick with the LA kings players work really well and I also like the simple text font choice. Simple but works and at the end of the day that is more then enough in the case of graphic text. Only thing that I would like to see change would be a logo swap as it would just make a huge difference in the graphic. I know I am getting lazy too when it comes to logo swaps but they matter. Overall a good graphic. 7/10 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/120048-6-tpe/#findComment-921913 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eynhallow 412 Posted April 18, 2022 Share Posted April 18, 2022 I have similar comments to what has been posted above. I like the brick wall with the Wolves logo superimposed. Good use of transparency here. The overall color scheme works. Nothing clashes. I likely would have tried to balance the players names, but that's only because I like things to look organized. Your choice of fonts here was good in that both names are easily read. As above, I thing a logo swap would be a nice addition. Also note that when you flip an image you also flip any writing or logo elements, so "LA" appears as its mirror image. Nice concept, but need some refinement. 8/10 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/120048-6-tpe/#findComment-922014 Share on other sites More sharing options...
v.2 1,411 Posted April 18, 2022 Share Posted April 18, 2022 I like this one Hogan, it flows really well with all the blacks/whites/greys. One thing I would like to see is some blending or stock effects over the top renders, to bring the piece together more. The fonts are dece but the placements are a bit awkward as well. Great shadows and lighting effects, and extra effort points for using 2 renders in this sig. Am I at 75 words yet? I hope so. I got a trivia question wrong so here I am. Overall rating 7/10 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/120048-6-tpe/#findComment-922101 Share on other sites More sharing options...
ke1vi 662 Posted April 22, 2022 Share Posted April 22, 2022 the background is quite nice and I like how it fades into each player. The text you have for Tucker looks a lot nicer with the glow effect, you should have done that for Ryan Li. I know you use a free imagine editor so I can't knock you for the jersey swap thing, but I mean I guess you could have found a better render that wasn't mirrored haha. The only other knock I have is the layout - logo doesn't seem in the right place and I feel like Tucker text can go above the player to match Li - minor things but something for you to consider in the future. Overall not bad - I do like the font you have for the text and everything matches the LA colors. 7/10 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/120048-6-tpe/#findComment-923162 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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