The LA Stars Are A Terrible Franchise...

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[Shindigs 1,771]

Probably my favorite graphic of yours. You did a very good job blending the render with the background and making it look very natural. The addition of the rain-looking effect on the right hand of the graphic also does a good job of highlighting how depressing playing for LA is currently. A nice touch, really.

 

If there's any gripe for me personally I think it's that I feel like you did a bit too much with the warping of the text. Though I really like it interacting with the background in the "negative" slice at the bottom. The "smudged" look at the very top of the C and A in Callum takes away from the otherwise mostly clean style of the text as well. Because I can, I will arbitrarily dock points from my equally arbitrary rating for it.

 

Rating: 6.9/10 (Yes, I'll keep rating everything this until ratings are removed as a requirement for reviews)

[ke1vi 662]

This is definitely one of your best graphics. A lot of good textures thrown together here to blend everything in together. The detail on the text is creative and not too much of an eyesore given the distortion. I like balance of black and white for the Stars color palette. The logo swap for the JC is decent and the lighting is placed perfectly. The only real knock I have is the LA Stars text looks a little "out of sync" with the rest of the graphic, but that's being picky and I honestly still love this one. Well balanced sig.

 

10/10

Edited December 11, 2022 by kelvi