gorlab 4,321 Posted October 22, 2014 Share Posted October 22, 2014 (edited) Edited October 22, 2014 by gorlab Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frank 5,057 Posted October 22, 2014 Share Posted October 22, 2014 Why'd you hide everything with those stocks except for the text? Gotta let the render be the focal tbh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gorlab 4,321 Posted October 22, 2014 Author Share Posted October 22, 2014 because I'm a no-talent sponge? Caillean 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frank 5,057 Posted October 22, 2014 Share Posted October 22, 2014 because I'm a no-talent sponge? Naw, you're steadily improving. Should post for some cnc dawg. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Grumpy Bear 347 Posted October 24, 2014 Share Posted October 24, 2014 Effort: 2/2 - Blending, lighting, text, coloring, you have it. Look: 2.25/3 - The render is dark and the background washed a bit, it messes the look up a bit. If you went to the exposure and messed with the offset a bit at the end it would have fixed that I feel. The blending is ok but could have been better, especially considering you left the text there to mess with the focal point. Creativity: 1/1 - Yeah Total: 5.25/6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Grumpy Bear 347 Posted October 25, 2014 Share Posted October 25, 2014 Bump Caillean 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack 498 Posted October 25, 2014 Share Posted October 25, 2014 Effort: 2/2 - Keep it up! I'm liking your style. Look: 2.25/3 - Bushito pretty much got it all, I'd just like to say that I like the styling of the text, just try to pull it in a bit closer to the render. Creativity: 1/1 - Absolutely. Final: 5/6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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