Paramorise 255 Posted November 7, 2014 Share Posted November 7, 2014 boubabi 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/14142-claimedlindberg/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack 498 Posted November 10, 2014 Share Posted November 10, 2014 Effort: 2/2 - Enough was done here. Look: 2.5/3 - Sig as a whole is a bit washed out, when you use bright stock like that, try to tone them down using the Levels adjustment (Control+L when the layer is selected) and bringing down the greys (middle slider). Text could be better, try to stick to simple fonts and let the render do the standing out. Keep up the progress. Creativity: 1/1 - Good choice of stocks. Total: 5.5/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/14142-claimedlindberg/#findComment-147920 Share on other sites More sharing options...
solas 1,951 Posted November 10, 2014 Share Posted November 10, 2014 Effort: 2/2 - Definitely enough effort. Look: 2.5/3 - Not a big fan of this. Like Jackim mention, the stock work is way too bright here, and because of this the render gets lost a bit. I like the background, but with some better lighting and text the sig will look flow better. I'd also like to add that I don't particularly care for not just the font, but the placement of the text - maybe put it slightly to the right (or to the center) of the render rather than the left. Creativity: 1/1 Total: 5.5/6 FINAL GRADE: 6/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/14142-claimedlindberg/#findComment-148086 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kendrick 4,741 Posted November 16, 2014 Share Posted November 16, 2014 Claimed Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/14142-claimedlindberg/#findComment-149877 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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