Caillean 504 Posted December 30, 2014 Share Posted December 30, 2014 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/15908-claimedlegionnaire/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
solas 1,951 Posted December 30, 2014 Share Posted December 30, 2014 Effort: 2/2 - Looks like a solid amount of effort here. Look: 2.75/3 - There's a good deal of this that I like - the jersey change and coloring especially - but there are a few changes that I'd make. First, I think some minor changes to the text (smaller subtext, possibly different font for the main text) would help. Second, maybe one more stock over the render (or even some smudging/displacing of the render) over the bottom right region of the sig would look nice. Finally, I'd suggest some better lighting on the face as well. Creativity: 1/1 Total: 5.75/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/15908-claimedlegionnaire/#findComment-167970 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Grumpy Bear 347 Posted December 31, 2014 Share Posted December 31, 2014 Effort: 2/2 - Blending, text, lighting, Stock work, effects, you definitely have it. Look: 2.75/3 - Jersey change, coloring and render effects are all good, text could use some work. Overall it's a nice job. Creativity: 1/1 - Yeah Total: 5.75/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/15908-claimedlegionnaire/#findComment-168142 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Senior Admin Will 4,660 Posted January 5, 2015 Senior Admin Share Posted January 5, 2015 Final = 6/6 Caillean 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/15908-claimedlegionnaire/#findComment-169422 Share on other sites More sharing options...
James 77 Posted January 11, 2015 Share Posted January 11, 2015 Claimed Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/15908-claimedlegionnaire/#findComment-170634 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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