KitRas 188 Posted February 8, 2015 Share Posted February 8, 2015 Bojo and Gunner 2 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/17031-claimedhey-mom-im-active-final-66/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
iRockstar 307 Posted February 9, 2015 Share Posted February 9, 2015 effort: 2/2 - Can't complain, cause activity! look: 2.5/3 - A couple things kill this for me. The font, and the lighting. It's too overdone with the lighting. Had this small glare been applied to parts of the sig and not all of it, you'd find that you'd have much better lighting techniques. As such, the font is just kind of there, and I'd like to see it closer to the render and meshing more with the rest of the graphic. creativity: 1/1 - Yeah! total: 5.5/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/17031-claimedhey-mom-im-active-final-66/#findComment-180415 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bojo 221 Posted February 9, 2015 Share Posted February 9, 2015 -1 for lying about being active. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/17031-claimedhey-mom-im-active-final-66/#findComment-180416 Share on other sites More sharing options...
solas 1,953 Posted February 15, 2015 Share Posted February 15, 2015 (edited) Effort: 2/2 - Stock work, lighting, text, definitely enough. Look: 2.5/3 - I have to agree that this is too bright, particularly on the render. I think doing more lighting that isn't from stocks would help here. Also, I think the render could be blended better with the background, maybe with some more subtle, darker stock work. Personally, I like the text a lot, but I think maybe you should make "Griffin" smaller, and move the text closer to the render. Creativity: 1/1 Total: 5.5/6 FINAL GRADE: 6/6 Edited February 15, 2015 by solas Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/17031-claimedhey-mom-im-active-final-66/#findComment-183701 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kesler 1,514 Posted February 17, 2015 Share Posted February 17, 2015 Claimed Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/17031-claimedhey-mom-im-active-final-66/#findComment-184806 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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