Jala 922 Posted March 31, 2015 Share Posted March 31, 2015 (edited) Edited March 31, 2015 by jaladolar Ahma 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/18794-claimedvalmount-final-56/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ahma 1,428 Posted March 31, 2015 Share Posted March 31, 2015 Thanks! Jala 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/18794-claimedvalmount-final-56/#findComment-198340 Share on other sites More sharing options...
.sniffuM 1,741 Posted April 2, 2015 Share Posted April 2, 2015 Effort: 2/2 - It's there. Look: 2/3 - You're definitely getting better. The lighting brush over the render's head and the strip of lighting on the render's arm are too bright, and the big dots in the background kind of take away from it. Text needs some work, but you've got a solid background going and you're getting there. Creativity: 1/1 - Mhm, Overall: 5/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/18794-claimedvalmount-final-56/#findComment-198980 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack 498 Posted April 6, 2015 Share Posted April 6, 2015 Effort: 2/2 - Yeah I can see enough was done here. Look: 2.25/3 - Overall it looks pretty good, but needs a lot of "finishing touches". For one, the lighting over him is too bright, and try not to cover the render's face with anything, in this case the lighting line. Creativity: 1/1 - Nice background work. Total: 5.25/6 Final: 5/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/18794-claimedvalmount-final-56/#findComment-200591 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frank 5,209 Posted April 21, 2015 Share Posted April 21, 2015 Claimed Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/18794-claimedvalmount-final-56/#findComment-205987 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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