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Threats made against LeBeau.

 

The life of an Aidan Shaw winner is not easy these days. After getting his eight shut out of the year LeBeau got threatened by the Captain of the Helsinki Titans, Ethan Osborne.  Due to LeBeau shutting out the current VHL Champions he got annoyed by the stellar play of the Toronto Legion goaltender. We are not even close to the play-off’s yet but Osborne is trying to get his most feared opponent to fear him instead.

 

At the press conference after the game Ethan Osborne gave a very detailed description of what he wanted to do with the goaltender. He would run down LeBeau in the next game, which followed by a step by step description of what he planned on doing.

 

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For the Toronto Legion Niklas Lindberg attended the press conference and as an answer to Osborne his words Lindberg described what he could expect if he tried doing that. He would definitely leave the ice in a lot of pain. The former rookie of the year can do anything, so if the Legion needs a goon to take out Osborne, the only question people can ask their selves is:  “Why not Lindberg? “

 

The weirdest part of the press conference was that Remy LeBeau was just sitting there. The captain of the Toronto Legion basically just ignored the Legion captain. He didn’t seem to be paying attention to him; he was just enjoying his flawless victory over the Titans. If the teams will meet again though, he already informed his teammates that they can just bash Osborne in the net and that LeBeau will take care of him himself.

 

 

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The Legion surprised the VHL in Season 29 by shutting out a lot of their opponents, the team got known for their defensive approach and surprised everybody with their cup run. When looking back at that victory it was also the birth of the current Legion line up. After the cup victory the team went in an immediate rebuild in order to get even stronger and go for a cup run a few years after. For Sandro Desaulniers the time has now come to get another cup as Toronto Legion member. While the conference is still stacked and it’s clear which three teams will have to battle eachother in order to reach the finals, the Legion General Manager is positive:

 

 

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We have a really solid line up, we might not have the top end TPE earners on the ice, but we do have chemistry. Guys like Niklas Lindberg and Jamie Shetler have insane chemistry on the second line and Teemu Lehtinen is playing the best hockey of his life. It’s hard to imagine some of our best players come from the second round of the draft. Anyone out of the Meute, Wranglers and the Legion is able to win the title, so the question everybody can ask now is “Why not us?”.

 

 

 

The Legion are ready to go for an upset, the Quebec City Meute may be the favorites but the Legion have shown that they are also able to beat them even with their back-up goaltender in net. That’s what the Legion is shooting for, an upset during the playoffs. Expect the catchphrase “Why Not Us?” to be trending on social media as Twitter soon.

 

 

 

*Disclaimer: These were not the actual words of Sandro; no general manager has been kidnapped or abused to get comments out of them.

 

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Content: 3/3 - The life of the Shaw winner must be oh so difficult as judged by this article hahaah. Looking like you're well on your way for a repeat as well. Congrats on the good play and good luck to the Legion in the playoffs. I don't see why it can't be them, so why not?

 

Grammar: 2/2 - Got confused at some parts. Grammar seemed rough.

 

his eight shut out of the year -> his eighth shutout of the year
The captain of the Toronto Legion basically just ignored the Legion captain. -> wat
If the teams will meet again -> If the teams meet again
line up -> lineup
 
Appearance: 1/1 - GIFs
 
Overall: 6/6 
Content: 3/3 - Labatte has nothing on LeBeau and I don't see him being denied a shot at the playoffs this time around.
 
Grammar: 1.5/2 - Definitely rough, found these on top of the already documented errors. Take your time and re-read your work, or even get a teammate to do so. A lot of stuff that would've been easily caught.
 
close to the play-off’s yet = close to the playoffs yet
another cup as Toronto Legion member. = another cup as a Toronto Legion member.
eachother = each other
social media as Twitter soon = social media such as Twitter soon
 
Appearance: 1/1 - Oh yes.
 
Overall: 5.5/6 - 
 
FINAL: 6/6
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