Claimed:Not as good as expected [Final 6/6]

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The regular season is close to ending and then the playoffs will begin. So, what has Valmount done so far? Nothing, not really. He has got something done. At the time of this article, Valmount has played 63 games and his point production is very bad compared to other players at his level in the VHLM. He is currently under point per game with only 42 points. Not very good. 15 goals is decent, but Valmount should have more assists. He has 91 hits, but 120 hits taken. Even that isn’t as good as Valmount was hoping for earlier in the season.

 

Valmount had a long lazy, slow productivity run, (around 30 - 40 games) when he didn’t do well. But now, he is showing some good production all over the ice. He is getting points and doing okay in the defensive side of the game (i.e. +/- is +29). Maybe Valmount will pick up the pace and continue this amazing job until the last game of the regular season. Maybe he can even get every stat to look good.

One thing is set in stone: Simon Valmount is a moody player. He has to work on his consistency a lot!

 

"This season hasn’t gone as well as I hoped it would go. I have amazing team mates, so I was hoping that I would do just a little bit better. But those 15 goals? How do I have so many goals? I’m not sure but, I have been training my shot like crazy! I can feel the improvement. But I still prefer passing though."

 

 

There’s a rumour, which says you are lazy? Comments on that please.

 

"No comments… Just kidding haha. Well… umm… Lately, I’ve been pretty lazy, I have family stuff going on and I lost a lot of money. I’ll tell you about that later. Back to my laziness. During the season I’ve trained and practiced so much, you have no idea Mr. Reporter! Rumours are rumours, in this case the rumour is based on a small fact. But I’ll continue training! I’ll spend half of my time on the gym and the other half practicing on passing, puck handling… etc.

 

Okay, so my family was here in Bratislava last weekend and I had a little dispute with my dad. First it was some yelling over nonsensical things with my dad, but later he found out my money problems. Right then he went very mad. My dad said to me "You’re irresponsible and you should learn to live, because you simply can’t live like this anymore kid! There are things that an adult should know and do!” Fortunately my mom wasn’t there when that happened. Later on, we came to agreement and settled things with my dad. And I quit gambling.

I’m glad my parents came over, I learned a lot from them. I was happy to see my little brother too. He’s a good kid."

 

 

Although Valmount is clearly disappointed with his production this season, there is sunshine on the horizon given his recent improvement and it could be a sign that dawn is breaking for this VHLer.

Edited June 1, 2015 by Ahma

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Content 3/3 - I almost docked you here because the article felt dull and didn't really have much of a common theme/meaning throughout.

 

Grammar 2/2 - Small errors, nothing too large

So, what = So what

Nothing, not really = double negative, so it'd be more like, nothing really.

sure but, = sure, but

improvement. But = improvement, but

 

Appearance 1/1 - Sure

 

Final 6/6

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