Daniel 565 Posted January 3, 2016 Share Posted January 3, 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissioner Beketov 8,787 Posted January 3, 2016 Commissioner Share Posted January 3, 2016 I’d have to see the original picture here to really tell what was done but it looks like there was a nice amount of re-colouring done on the image which makes the render colours and BG really look cool. I would like to see more done with stock work to create a focus point on the render though. The lighting is a good start but not quite enough. The text is worsening this effect big time. It stands out right now like I sore thumb and looks slapped on. The colour doesn’t match at all (I would suggest if you want red to try grabbing the colour from the jersey of the post so it matches) and the stroke is kinda an eyesore. Get some different effects and some blending on that text and make it feel like it wasn’t an afterthought, it’ll go a long way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daniel 565 Posted January 3, 2016 Author Share Posted January 3, 2016 Just now, Beketov said: I’d have to see the original picture here to really tell what was done but it looks like there was a nice amount of re-colouring done on the image which makes the render colours and BG really look cool. I would like to see more done with stock work to create a focus point on the render though. The lighting is a good start but not quite enough. The text is worsening this effect big time. It stands out right now like I sore thumb and looks slapped on. The colour doesn’t match at all (I would suggest if you want red to try grabbing the colour from the jersey of the post so it matches) and the stroke is kinda an eyesore. Get some different effects and some blending on that text and make it feel like it wasn’t an afterthought, it’ll go a long way. Yeah I made this in about ten minutes this morning, I'm going to have another crack at the text, am I allowed to just edit my submission? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissioner Beketov 8,787 Posted January 3, 2016 Commissioner Share Posted January 3, 2016 2 hours ago, Daniel said: Yeah I made this in about ten minutes this morning, I'm going to have another crack at the text, am I allowed to just edit my submission? Technically speaking no although you get an auto 6 on all PT's now anyway so that doesn't matter. Feel free to post the changed one if you want people to see it. Daniel 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
boubabi 4,725 Posted January 3, 2016 Share Posted January 3, 2016 I like the render efx. The whites are "washed out or whatever its called, but it needs a fix, obviously. More work could be done like beketov said but it looks good so whatever. Daniel 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CowboyinAmerica 2,759 Posted January 5, 2016 Share Posted January 5, 2016 Claimed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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