gregreg 930 Posted January 7, 2016 Share Posted January 7, 2016 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/27029-claimedjo-22/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissioner Beketov 9,025 Posted January 7, 2016 Commissioner Share Posted January 7, 2016 This feels oddly triply to me, I'm not entirely sure why. I think it's something about the BG being so green while the render and text seem under-saturated. Just gives it an odd vibe. Not necessarily bad, just odd. I'd like to see a bit more lighting to really make the render (and it's nice effects) pop and maybe an extra exposure layer to blend everything together just a tad bit better. I do like your subtle depth with the leaves going over the text BTW, nice touch. Good job overall. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/27029-claimedjo-22/#findComment-300406 Share on other sites More sharing options...
boubabi 4,725 Posted January 10, 2016 Share Posted January 10, 2016 Dunno if you went with a compelte black and white effect on the render, but I feel something is turning it a little bit green. Overall, the render could use some more contrast, the background is dope. You could take a green leaf, enlarge it, blur it and put it in front on the sig so it makes us feel some depth in the sig, which is nice. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/27029-claimedjo-22/#findComment-301685 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kesler 1,514 Posted January 12, 2016 Share Posted January 12, 2016 Claimed Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/27029-claimedjo-22/#findComment-302470 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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