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This feels oddly triply to me, I'm not entirely sure why. I think it's something about the BG being so green while the render and text seem under-saturated. Just gives it an odd vibe. Not necessarily bad, just odd. I'd like to see a bit more lighting to really make the render (and it's nice effects) pop and maybe an extra exposure layer to blend everything together just a tad bit better. I do like your subtle depth with the leaves going over the text BTW, nice touch. Good job overall.

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Dunno if you went with a compelte black and white effect on the render, but I feel something is turning it a little bit green. Overall, the render could use some more contrast, the background is dope. You could take a green leaf, enlarge it, blur it and put it in front on the sig so it makes us feel some depth in the sig, which is nice. 

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