Tim 182 Posted March 13, 2016 Share Posted March 13, 2016 boubabi 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/28773-cool-story-bro-reviewed/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack 498 Posted March 13, 2016 Share Posted March 13, 2016 Lookin' good. Really like the text, simple but clean. Render effects are very good. I like the dots, but I think it would be better if they faded as they got further to the outside. Could use a bit more stock work, but looks good clean like this as well. Great work. Tim 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/28773-cool-story-bro-reviewed/#findComment-320122 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissioner Beketov 9,107 Posted March 14, 2016 Commissioner Share Posted March 14, 2016 Well done on the lighting first off, I think it works really well here. I also like the text but think it stands out just a TAD bit too much, might be better if you just move it down a few layers to blend it better but not certain. I like both the dots (although as Jack said, get some of them blending in more to create depth) and the lines you used however I don't know if they work well together, they have very different themes. Overall, well done but missing a few key things to make it great. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/28773-cool-story-bro-reviewed/#findComment-320445 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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