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You have some cool ideas going on here but the execution isn't quite there. I like the paint splatters, especially with the varying colours. Would be nice to see a bit more with the background though. I find the pure black makes it hard to add anything else to it. Text isn't bad. I think the font is nice but it's a little boring without much blending or stock work going on. Keep at it.

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  • jack changed the title to kai [1/2]

The render is cut very poorly, that's probably the only major thing wrong with this. Text is alright on this, maybe make the text on the right a tad smaller. I like the background on this one. Some of your best work though, keep going at it and you will get even better.

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  • 701 changed the title to kai [REVIEWED]

Funny how that isn't even a render @701 and it had a different background until I changed it.

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