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the stroke on the render is too sharp looking compared to the whole curvy look. The background could use a more constant coloring . The lens are cool and fits the whole scene. The text is decent too. good work.

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I'd like to see a little more going on with this; the BG especially seems a little bland for my liking. I don't mind strokes like that but would like to see them a tad closer to the ender. Text is okay but the k is way sharper than the other letters which looks weird. Overall it's okay but feels a tad bit unfinished.

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