scoop 3,439 Posted April 25, 2016 Share Posted April 25, 2016 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/29978-claimednew-gal-reviewed/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissioner Beketov 9,034 Posted April 25, 2016 Commissioner Share Posted April 25, 2016 This is a problem I've noticed with your work: too bright. Get the contrast down so that your dark colours actually look dark. The wavy effect is okay but I think it would be better if the waves were larger. Colours look okay but could be stronger; although that may be because they are washed out. Text needs to be closer to the render and I don't know how I feel about the overlay setting I seem to be seeing. I think clipping a stock to the text on normal might have turned out better. DollarAndADream 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/29978-claimednew-gal-reviewed/#findComment-331901 Share on other sites More sharing options...
701 309 Posted April 26, 2016 Share Posted April 26, 2016 Yo hombre, this is too bright. Use a lighting map, that should fix your lighting quick. I like the wind effect you have going on here, and the text is pretty good outside of placement, I think a tad closer to the render and it's perfect. Good job though overall. DollarAndADream 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/29978-claimednew-gal-reviewed/#findComment-332045 Share on other sites More sharing options...
CowboyinAmerica 2,894 Posted May 2, 2016 Share Posted May 2, 2016 Claimed Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/29978-claimednew-gal-reviewed/#findComment-333601 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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