scoop 3,425 Posted April 25, 2016 Share Posted April 25, 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissioner Beketov 9,020 Posted April 25, 2016 Commissioner Share Posted April 25, 2016 This is a problem I've noticed with your work: too bright. Get the contrast down so that your dark colours actually look dark. The wavy effect is okay but I think it would be better if the waves were larger. Colours look okay but could be stronger; although that may be because they are washed out. Text needs to be closer to the render and I don't know how I feel about the overlay setting I seem to be seeing. I think clipping a stock to the text on normal might have turned out better. DollarAndADream 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
701 309 Posted April 26, 2016 Share Posted April 26, 2016 Yo hombre, this is too bright. Use a lighting map, that should fix your lighting quick. I like the wind effect you have going on here, and the text is pretty good outside of placement, I think a tad closer to the render and it's perfect. Good job though overall. DollarAndADream 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CowboyinAmerica 2,887 Posted May 2, 2016 Share Posted May 2, 2016 Claimed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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