Paramorise 255 Posted May 30, 2016 Share Posted May 30, 2016 Kesler and gorlab 2 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/30894-claimedforsberg-22/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tim 182 Posted June 1, 2016 Share Posted June 1, 2016 Claimed Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/30894-claimedforsberg-22/#findComment-345627 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissioner Beketov 9,095 Posted June 6, 2016 Commissioner Share Posted June 6, 2016 (edited) Right and left sides look like totally different pieces, would have liked to see more of a flow between the two; preferably using the style from the right. I think those lines could have made for a nice clean piece. Render placement is great although lighting and effects could use a bit of work. Text placement (are you seeing a trend?) is spot on but the effects (drop shadow and emboss especially) seem a tad heavy handed which makes the text a little much for a piece like this. Edited June 6, 2016 by Beketov Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/30894-claimedforsberg-22/#findComment-347237 Share on other sites More sharing options...
701 309 Posted June 9, 2016 Share Posted June 9, 2016 NEVER use emboss on text, it just looks incredibly tacky. The second render could use a blur/lower opacity. Left side on the background looks great, right side not so much could use more effects. Stroke isn't great on the text either. This isn't terrible, but little things are holding this back from being great. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/30894-claimedforsberg-22/#findComment-348544 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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