BluObieZ 1,125 Posted July 3, 2016 Share Posted July 3, 2016 INT-WAREHOURSE-MORNING Angelo is sitting back in his chair with his feet up on the desk relaxing with a smile on his face. Alec walks into the room and smacks his feet off the desk Alec @ADwyer87 We are about the heart of the day and the most key few hours and I find you back here with you hand down your pants Angelo @Molholt My hand was not in my pants, my feet were on the desk Alec glares at Angelo Alec It’s a figure of speech Angelo Figure of speech? Who says it? Alec People Angelo No they don’t because it’s fucked Alec You got an attitude problem bro. Angelo stands up and gets in the face of Alec as he points at himself Angelo Oh I have a problem? Angelo pokes Alec in the chest Angelo You came in here and smacked my feet off the table and I somehow have a attitude problem. I am just trying to relax before everything happens Alec takes a step back Alec No need to get so defensive about it. Angelo Yes there is every need for it. You more wound up then a rubber band and I have to deal with it. It seems like you have drank a big mug of coffee, like one of those novelty mugs that are huge… actually no you drank a pot of coffee and you are just walking around like you have a stick up your ass. But the fact of the matter is that we cannot do anything right now. Till Ken arrives at ATU and Rob gets here. So sit the fuck down and the next time you grab coffee for fucks sake get some decaf INT-ATU-MORNING Buck is intensely looking at Mail Dude who is looking at him with a scared look on his face Buck @JardyB10 This man is scum. Just look at him. He looks like one of them Fre @frescoelmo He looks normal to me Buck Yeah to your untrained eye. But me with my highly trained eye and fine-tuned senses I know for a fact that this scum is a terrorist. Fre You didn’t get into the ATU because you couldn’t differentiate between innocence and terrorist. You would shoot the hostage or a civilian. Buck looks around Buck Shut up! No one knows that and I would like to think that I have grown since then Fre Yeah… into a lunatic Buck Shut up and inject this scum with truth serum Fre Why the hell do you even carry a suitcase around filled with truth serum? Buck It’s not filled with just truth serum Fre opens the suitcase to see a bunch of syringes with the word “Truth” on them. Also syringes with the word “Death” and “Life” on them. Also a few energy bars/drinks litter the disorganized suitcase. Fre Do you really need to label them all? Buck Yeah actually do. Because if I want to give a guy a heart attack I give him “Death” but if it was not labeled I could give him “Life” and that would boost his immune system and give his a shot of adrenaline. See the difference? Fre … No all I see is a crazy guy trying to be Jack Bauer Buck Don’t you dare bring my idol into this. I can only wish to be a quarter of the agent he was. Fre picks up a energy bar Fre What’s this for? If the person you are torturing is hungry? Buck takes the bar away from Fre and opens it before taking a bite Buck No, I get peckish at times INT-WAREHOUSE-MORNING Angelo is on the phone as he paces around the room. After a minute he gets off the phone Angelo Ken has arrived at ATU soon any loose ends will be cleaned up Alec I hope so because if not then Rob will be mad Angelo Fuck Rob Alec Don’t let him hear you say that INT-ATU-MORNING Buck Grab the fucking Truth syringe Fre. I need help here Fre You got that right, you need help Buck Are you not going to help me? Fre Fuck that, I will not torture someone that clearly isn’t a terrorist Buck Then get the fuck out you scumbag Fre leaves the room as Buck grabs a syringe that reads “Truth” on it. We now see KEN DICKSON enter the destroyed front to the ATU building. Armed guards walk around as army and police officials conduct their investigation. Ken walks up to a guard that is blocking a door way that is totally destroyed. Ken presents his ID that reads “Kenny Powers IT Department” the guard looks at the picture then at Kenny. He inspects it front and back. Ken looks calm and cool the whole time. The guard shrugs and hands Ken the card Guard Seems legit Elsewhere at ATU Phil. David and Frank are in the room next to the interrogation room watching it from behind one way glass. Fre rushes into the room Fre You need to stop him Phil Why? Fre Um… because he isn’t an agent Phil We already knew that because as you can tell we lost a lot of people today. He is our only hope Fre Only hope? That man Points at Buck who is injecting the truth serum into Mail Dude while laughing Fre Is insane and you are going to let him kill that innocent man? Phil We don’t know if he is innocent Fre I know he is because anyone with a brain would know that Phil I have a brain Fre Then use it! EXT-WAREHOUSE-MORNING Angelo and Alec are outside the warehouse as a convoy of black SUV’s, Hummers and a stretch black limo arrives. Security personnel rush to the limo and make sure the area is secure before they open the door to the limo. ROB MENACE gets out wearing a perfect suit. He inspects his suit making sure there is no dirt or creases on it before he snaps his finger. His assistant puts sun glasses on him. Rob now walks forward to Angelo and Alec. Rob We ready? INT-ATU-MORNING Fre If that man dies it’s on you. Do you want that? Phil shakes his head Phil @Phil No it would be on agent Buck not me Fre You mean make belief agent Buck. If he kills him you will watch it happen when you could have stopped him Phil That’s a stretch even for you Fre You don’t even know me Phil In the minutes I have known you I can tell that was a stretch. But now let’s watch what this terrorist scum says Fre He cannot talk! And he isn’t a terrorist As Phil begins to ignore Fre, Buck begins to yell at Mail Dude Buck WHERE IS THE BOMB? Buck slams his fist on the table Buck COME ON! SPEAK YOU PIECE OF SHIT Mail dude shakes his head trying to say he can’t speak but he cannot. Buck takes this as he refuses to speak. Buck DON’T MAKE ME BUST OUT THE LAVA SYRINGE YOU WON’T LIKE IT YOU FUCK Ken enters the room with Phil, David, Frank and Fre in it and hands his ID card that now reads “Agent” on it. Phil looks at it Phil Legit shit right here. Ken The White house has sent me to interrogate the terrorist Phil Get in line Episode fades to black Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/31824-claimedthe-front-s01e03-terrowhat-reviewed/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evans 305 Posted July 10, 2016 Share Posted July 10, 2016 Review: Is there a previous one leading up to this or is this a stand alone piece? I like seeing people write stuff that's different and this definietly fits that bill. My favorite character is Mail Dude. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/31824-claimedthe-front-s01e03-terrowhat-reviewed/#findComment-356777 Share on other sites More sharing options...
BluObieZ 1,125 Posted July 12, 2016 Author Share Posted July 12, 2016 On 10/07/2016 at 10:59 AM, Evans said: Review: Is there a previous one leading up to this or is this a stand alone piece? I like seeing people write stuff that's different and this definietly fits that bill. My favorite character is Mail Dude. Yes there are 2 previous ones. Hence why it's E03 Molholt 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/31824-claimedthe-front-s01e03-terrowhat-reviewed/#findComment-357309 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kesler 1,514 Posted July 19, 2016 Share Posted July 19, 2016 Claimed Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/31824-claimedthe-front-s01e03-terrowhat-reviewed/#findComment-360160 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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