Claimed:don't have any media spot ideas [1/2]

[scoop 3,432]

 

[Kendrick 4,741]

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[Beketov 9,026]

Render is over blended or just messed with too much as it is barely there at all, lighting isn't great, exposure is way under so everything just feels washed out; text doesn't match anything. Unfortunately the stock work, which isn't really great in itself, is probably the best part of this. I know you are an MS guy which is why this isn't really that great but you need to really practice the basics of what makes a good sig.

[Molholt 2,185]

If this was intended to emulate a more artistic, sort of a combination of paint powder and watercolor, then I think the effects work. The text really feels out of place here as it doesn't seem to match much of anything. I think the render and the treatment of it could be more like a vintage style and its not as bad to me as it is to Beketov. I appreciate that it is a bit different, but it isn't quite there yet to be great.