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Claimed:lenoir [1/2]


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On 12/5/2016 at 2:36 PM, brovy said:

MGmexos.jpg

 

+ 2 uncapped for new member 2/3

 

Some of the light flares are a little too strong, and some

stonger lighting/curves layer could help bring the focus to the render.  It also feels like there hasn't been a ton of work on the render, but you might have just been really subtle about it.  I like the idea of the light coming off of his back. I like the font for the text, but whatever's going on with the inside makes it a little hard to read because of how it interacts with what's behind it (particularly in the "eb" area). Nice piece though!

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  • Pandar changed the title to Claimed:lenoir [1/2]

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I like the start of it, but more could be added. The font looks decent and it makes a great contrast but the efx could use more pop. Try some adjustment layers like curves and levels to make the color pop.

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