Da Trifecta 1,902 Posted December 4, 2017 Share Posted December 4, 2017 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/45805-claimed-its-bigger-than-the-stars-22/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exlaxchronicles 415 Posted December 10, 2017 Share Posted December 10, 2017 You've made his name stand out not too bad against his darker jersey. Now I'm not sure if those are ninja stars, bullet holes, barbs or rust spots on the font, but I like it. I would have centered his name to the right just a little bit though. Everything in this render is a little too dark, kind of like the cold black heart of one of my ex's but you seem to have a touch of light exposure at the top. A bit more would brighten up the SIG. The BG is raining, snowing or he's travelling through the cosmos at warp 10 but I'm not sure. I think if those BG lights were brighter it would perk up the SIG. I find it hard to do all b&w type SIG's but a few minor adjustments would add some extra aesthetics to this. A decent yet conservative looking SIG. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/45805-claimed-its-bigger-than-the-stars-22/#findComment-489531 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quik 4,113 Posted December 27, 2017 Share Posted December 27, 2017 Review: This is pretty cool! I really like the text and the colouring of the render. I think that the lighting source could be a bit stronger, right now it's a very dark image. I'd also have the rain/snow falling behind the render. I think that with the stronger lighting would go a long way to making the render pop and really stand out. Overall this is a solid effort! Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/45805-claimed-its-bigger-than-the-stars-22/#findComment-493089 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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