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  • 3 weeks later...

I know your not around anymore Boob but I'll critique it anyhooz.

The soft yellow BG is actually not too bad. I think its cool how the floor boards tend to blend in with the BG light source.

Your whole render has a pixelation to it which takes away the clarity from the SIG.

The dots and lines Idk the point of em but its passable.

Your font kinda has a 16th century feel to it and its cool,but yours is too blurred and washed out. It needs more sharpness to it. The smaller font needs.to be more bold as well.

I like that you've used a b&w render for his face but it needs sharpness and the brightness turned down.

Over all an OK render but you've done better.

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