Joseph Wolf Rookie Profile [6 TPE Approved - Incomplete]

[Joseph Wolf 3]

Joseph Wolf - A Lethal Rocket

Full Name: Joseph Wolf
Position: LW
Age: 18
Handedness: Left
Height (inches): 5"9
Weight (lbs.): 187
Birthplace: Kuopio, Finland


This youngster has been under a keen watch of scouts since he was playing in the minors. He has built his own way of bursting trough defence and shooting from every lane. Wolf has lot to learn but the attributes of speed and shot make him a very prominent young star to any team.

STRENGHTS

SKATING - What ever this young dynamo does, he does it with speed first, absolute rocket of first step getting off to top speeds quicker than a Lamborghini on a dry spell.

 

SHOT - Oh yes this kid knows how to shoot but maybe not yet how to score from every one of them. He has a weird twist in his wrister that makes it very hard for a goalie to get a idea where he's gonna put it. At 18 he has also recorded his teams slapper record with 101 mph beast of a slap. Damn!

PASSING - What, still not impressed? Wolf has the senses of master Yoda when it comes to finding an open man in top speed. He can pass the puck trough thigtest of holes and has modelled his passing game watching Blake Wheeler from Winnipeg Jets. Not bad reference kid, not bad at all.

WEAKNESSES

FACEOFFS - He has a awful record of winning only 19% of the faceoffs troughout his career, alltough he is not an center after all, there is serious improvement needed in his faceoff skills.

DEFENDING - Wolf has a nose for goals and scoring points but when it comes to defence, he is no means a two-way player. Wolf is best used as a quick force to get the puck past the blueline but at this time not to use at PK cause of his abysmal sense of defending. Serious improvement needed.

 

FIGHTING - Wolf gets only in fights to defend his teammates but has never won any. He should really consider next time when jumped upon.

 

 

 

[Banackock 7,642]

Not bad, man. Good to see the effort and enthusiasm. You look good thus far  

[BBNAT 55]

Nice Rookie Report!  I'll make a note to not be between the goal and Wolf's slapshot.

[DollarAndADream 3,356]

Review:

@Joseph Wolf

You've missed the 500 word requirement for Rookie Profiles to claim 8 TPE, so for now I'd say this is worth a 6.

[Exlaxchronicles 415]

A decent write up but you need to watch out for spelling mistakes Joseph, as there are a number of them.

Your sentence structure is good  but there are one or two areas where the word phrasing wasn't utilized properly.

Punctuation was fine it seems so good job.

Definitely have to make sure you hit that 500 word mark bud, so try and extend the wording to hit that mark.

Great that you've bolded the title for each paragraph section and also added a pic!! Maybe try next time to center the pic and bolded titles for a more aesthetic look.

Try and write a few media spots soon, along with the radio 590. Keep it up!