Arthur 02/11 [1/2]

[Arthur 133]

[Exlaxchronicles 415]

Your deviating from your normal style of design which is nice to see.

Nice layering of the red and orange onto the black background. Not so much a fan of the word in red layered onto the orange, too close in color, and I think it looks out of place.

Good looking two styled fonts on the bottom right with size differential. Its legible to read but a little too close again in color. Maybe a different colored border around "Iseault" would contrast it more and a border around the first name would help as well.

Logo change...yes! Pretty well done as well.

Like how you've layered the orange over his right shoulder too.

Everything has just enough sharpness, nice saturation, lighting(lil too bright with the white for me) to give just separation and contrast.

Good to see your progressing with your SIG's! Yuck on the word hate but you've still.knocked this one outta the park! She's a beaut!