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[Da Trifecta 1,902]

Da Trifecta currently has Davey Jones playing in the VHL and he is on his fourth season. He spent one season in the VHLM of his career and the other three have been in the VHL. Quite frankly DT is content with the way his client has been going so far but as it stands right now, he is doing more scouting. Last time he came out and said that it would be a goalie and as of right now, he picked up a few more. Below will be a list of all the players that he wants to put out his other "clients".

 

Name: Nikolai Czaplewski

Position: Defense

Height: 6'6"

Weight: 236 lbs

Hometown: Rzeszów, Poland

Age: 14

 

 

Nikolai Czaplewski is currently in his freshman year at high school and he is on the junior varsity team for his high school's team. He has been named captain of his team and they are set to open the season on a high note. He is highly regarded as one of the best players on his team and there are plenty of pro scouts who have been drooling over him. They are keeping tabs on him and a few have even talked to him already. He told the media that he just wants to play hockey like any normal student and he doesn't want to have to be bothered with them. He said that he wants to keep everything about him rather private as he knows how the media loves to slander things. He did however tell them that this season, he does want people to see that he is something special and that he will be showing what he is made of.

 

 

Name: François Gauthier

Position: Goalie

Height: 6'3"

Weight: 219

Hometown: Yellowknife, Canada

Age: 14

 

 

François Gauthier is about to enter his freshman year as well as the teams starting goalie. Now he hasn't received the hype that Nikolai has, but he is a great player. Playing for the junior varsity squad, he will be sitting behind the current starter who is a senior and is already headed to a college in the United States. François has been training with the current starter in hopes that he will be able to polish his game and make sure that he will be ready for any future endeavors in hockey. He wants to be one of the best goalies in the nation and he knows how hard he has to work. He is willing to put forth the effort and time and is hoping it will pay off sooner rather than later. He is enrolled in honors classes and he knows that he can keep his grades on par with what is needed for him to stay on the team. With lots of honors classes and hockey, he has a pretty tight schedule and rarely gets time to do anything else.

 

The Da Trifecta agency would like to issue a thank you for reading in on his reports about his future stars. He hopes they have a great high school career and he wants to keep an eye on them to decide who he will bring to the VHL. More to be released on two other players within the next few seasons. Stay tuned and don't miss out.

[STZ 5,393]

Height: 6'6"

Weight: 236 lbs

Age: 14

 

#ogre

[Da Trifecta 1,902]

He hit a growth spurt early

[Kesler 1,514]

Height: 6'6"

Weight: 236 lbs

Age: 14

 

lololololol

[Da Trifecta 1,902]

 

Height: 6'6"

Weight: 236 lbs

Age: 14

 

lololololol

 

 

Dude is a beast

[Guest Svoboda_3]

Content: 3/3

547 words. You enlisted two future prospects in this Media Spot. I liked it, but I thought it was weird in some instances because Yellowknife probably wouldn't have Varsity Teams, but rather a 14-year old would most likely be playing Bantam hockey and I doubt Poland would have Varsity or High School teams. It's important to do some research and make it somewhat real.

Grammar: 2/2

Some odd sentences aside from these, but nothing severe.

 

at = in

junior varsity = Junior Varsity

varsity team for his high school's team = Varsity high school team

teams = teams'

 

Appearance: 1/1

Looked good.

Overall: 6/6

Edited March 23, 2014 by Svoboda_3

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