off the rails 9 Posted May 13, 2014 Share Posted May 13, 2014 the title feeds the imagination. my first time ever make a signature, so play nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Senior Admin Will 4,660 Posted May 13, 2014 Senior Admin Share Posted May 13, 2014 popping your graphic cherry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
boubabi 4,725 Posted May 13, 2014 Share Posted May 13, 2014 looks cool bud Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sherifflobo 137 Posted May 13, 2014 Share Posted May 13, 2014 Effort: 2/2 - First ever graphic, so I'm going to give you full marks here. Look: 1.75/3 - I don't want to be overally harsh since it's your first graphic, so I'll be a little lenient. However, the key things that could be improved upon are blending, text, and to an extent, render placement. For blending, it's all about making everything come together as one. One of the best ways to do that is to choose a background that's a similar color to the render's jersey. A red background would have really helped this. Blending can also be achieved in stock work, when you start using stocks to help your blending try to keep it simple instead of throwing a bunch of different textures on there trying to make it work. Simple stocks like scratches and dust stocks can help improve blending without making things look messy or crowded. With text, try to stick to a simple fontface like arial when you're a beginner. If you also do a subtext, try and keep it the same fontface or a similar fontface as your main text. With render placement, I would move your render over to the right slightly so it's not off the canvas. You do have a decent start here, but overall, the sig feels unfinished, and needs some work to make this really good. I don't want to discourage you as this is your first graphic, but just keep practicing and you'll get better with time. This is a good resource for beginners: http://www.vhlforum.com/index.php?/topic/2501-jacks-guide-to-making-not-shitty-sigs/ Creativity: 1/1 - Yep Total: 4.75/6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Svoboda_3 Posted May 14, 2014 Share Posted May 14, 2014 This is all I can ask for as a GM is just for someone to try and do their best. I love the fact that you attempted something and that you have been working hard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STZ 5,336 Posted May 14, 2014 Share Posted May 14, 2014 Technically not your first if you do yourself... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
off the rails 9 Posted May 14, 2014 Author Share Posted May 14, 2014 Technically not your first if you do yourself... if it was that way, we'd all be experienced though honestly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
off the rails 9 Posted May 14, 2014 Author Share Posted May 14, 2014 This is all I can ask for as a GM is just for someone to try and do their best. I love the fact that you attempted something and that you have been working hard. 'Attempted'? What's that supposed to mean?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Svoboda_3 Posted May 14, 2014 Share Posted May 14, 2014 'Attempted'? What's that supposed to mean?! Attempted as in doing it. I won't even attempt doing graphics before I beat the shit out of my computer. You ventured into something you aren't familiar with and I respect the effort. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BOOM 8,628 Posted May 14, 2014 Share Posted May 14, 2014 Good work man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
off the rails 9 Posted May 14, 2014 Author Share Posted May 14, 2014 Can I get graded? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
8Ovechkin8 262 Posted May 15, 2014 Share Posted May 15, 2014 Effort: 2/2 - Not bad for first. Look: 1.75/3 - Can't really add much more. Lobo got everything covered. Practice, practice, practice. Creativity: 1/1 - Yep Total: 4.75/6 5/6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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