Jump to content

Recommended Posts

Effort: 2/2 - First ever graphic, so I'm going to give you full marks here.  

Look: 1.75/3 - I don't want to be overally harsh since it's your first graphic, so I'll be a little lenient.  However, the key things that could be improved upon are blending, text, and to an extent, render placement.  For blending, it's all about making everything come together as one.  One of the best ways to do that is to choose a background that's a similar color to the render's jersey.  A red background would have really helped this.  Blending can also be achieved in stock work, when you start using stocks to help your blending try to keep it simple instead of throwing a bunch of different textures on there trying to make it work.  Simple stocks like scratches and dust stocks can help improve blending without making things look messy or crowded.  With text, try to stick to a simple fontface like arial when you're a beginner.  If you also do a subtext, try and keep it the same fontface or a similar fontface as your main text.  With render placement, I would move your render over to the right slightly so it's not off the canvas.

 

You do have a decent start here, but overall, the sig feels unfinished, and needs some work to make this really good.  I don't want to discourage you as this is your first graphic, but just keep practicing and you'll get better with time.  This is a good resource for beginners:

 

http://www.vhlforum.com/index.php?/topic/2501-jacks-guide-to-making-not-shitty-sigs/

 

Creativity: 1/1 - Yep

 

Total: 4.75/6

Guest
This topic is now closed to further replies.
  • Recently Browsing   0 members

    • No registered users viewing this page.
×
×
  • Create New...