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Have you ever wondered what it would be like to play in a fictional hockey league where a text based simulation engine does all of the work for you? You may play NHL on your PS4 a lot, but you want to play that game with more people or maybe you suck at video games and would rather write or make graphics. Ever wonder if there was a league you can join to meet new people and have fun with others who genuinely enjoy sports?

 

Well, wonder no further, we have the Victory Hockey League or VHL for short! In this league, you can create your player and take the journey from being drafted (or waivers) in the VHL Minor Leagues where you could play for teams such as the Philadelphia Reapers, Las Vegas Aces or Ottawa Lynx. There are other teams in the Minors, so do not worry if you do not like any of those locations. From there, you will enter the big leagues through a draft. The VHL GMs will reach out to you and scout you, just like in real life. Ever want to know what it feels like being wanted? Well, wonder no further! In the VHL, there are teams like the Prague Phantoms, Riga Reign, DC Dragons, and Vancouver Wolves among many more. You will play for those teams and make your path to the Hall of Fame. 

 

How do you get better? Well, there are various ways to get better and get closer to your goal of being in the Hall of Fame. We have written options (500 words or less) as well as graphic options for all you creative folks out there. By doing these per week, you can hit the cap of the amount of points you can earn and add to your attributes every week. It is as simple as that! If you do not have time to do written or graphic, we also have welfare where you can just make a post and STILL get better, how easy is that? There are options for everyone to participate and enjoy the league as a whole. There is a great community with a lot of people willing to help!

 

If you have questions, feel free to pop into our discord, we can help you with builds, understanding point tasks, navigating the forums, or anything you may have in order to help your experience here in the VHL! There will always be people to help such as General Mangers, Board members, and just people in general to help you get the answers you so desire. If you are in other leagues, we do have some affiliate partnerships for you to take advantage of! We have so much for you to do here, so, we look forward to seeing your player created soon! 

 

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Here was a fun little recruiting pitch I made for the VHL. I think it covers a lot of what people may look for as well as not giving all of the information away so people go into the discord, pop onto the website and ask more questions. I think some recruiting pitches give out too much information so it may turn people off. I like to give a little feel of what it's like and let them join to figure out the rest. Let me know what you think. 

 

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Just now, GustavMattias said:

You forgot "just like Be a Pro" but with more text

Fixed that for you.

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Pitch is clean and solid. Gets straight to the point and isn't onerous to read.

 

Depending where you would use this, I would insert pictures and links (like the discord link that it suggests). I'm not entirely sold on this alignment usage, I think i'd rather have it lined up to the left or even center boxed but that's just a preference I think. Would probably add a an image linked banner too I think if whatever medium you're using this in has it available.

 

8/10

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