Miami Marauders player gets into a fight with a fan

[osens 297]

Oh Sens, Miami Marauders sniper, got into a fight with one of the fans, that was watching Minnesota - Miami game.

 

Sens was furious after the game, after one fan of Minnesota taunted Oh Sens about him not scoring any goals or points, after getting hyped. Oh Sens then quickly went up the stairs to fan and attacked him, and even knocked him out. After some brawling, Sens and fan were seperated and Oh Sens wrote a police report on this fan for attacking him verbaly. 

 

The league haven't given out their statement, but Miami has said that they will have serious talk with Oh Sens about his attitude at the game and he could be looking at a fine about his actions, but nothing is official. Miami has also said, that they will not be sitting Sens out for some games, of course, if VHLM doesn't decide to suspend Sens for some games.

 

Close source to us, has said that VHLM are not thinking of giving suspension, but they will probably give a big fine to Miami and Sens for his actions. There have been talks, that Sens will have to see anger managment classes.

 

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[bigAL 2,176]

I like to do my reviews in the forms of two stars and a wish:

 

Great job letting us get to know Osens the player, even if he is a deranged goon

I like that you included the consequences of his actions from a variety of stakeholders

~ I wish you used a few less commas. Remember, you only need them when you take a breath reading your sentence out loud!

 

Overall, really well done!