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SITR: Draft Special Rhynex Entertainment

 

Stick In The Rink is a new channel on VHL Network, where we explore the 73rd Season of VHL and it's minor associate VHLM. This week on Stick In The Rink, we are featuring young S73 VHLM draftee, Rhynex Entertainment, who has just been drafted into the VHLM.  (48 words)

 

C  Rhynex Entertainment

 

Rhynex is a highly touted Canadian prospect from the Midget Juniors. Just barely 16 years of age and already 6'0'' tall, but at 176 lbs, he will still need to gain some muscle to broad up his frame.  Rhynex is a player loved by his coaches, a mega workhorse; first on the ice and last off every practice. A dream Center for most coaches with his work ethics, but definitely still a diamond in the rough as he has an unpolished  skill set. Rhynex has shown to be skilled on the dot, fantastic face-offer against youths around his age. There will be a need for much improvement in his Checking, Strength, Skating, and Puck Handling. And is definitely a project in the offense and defensive zones, but he has the potential to do great things.  (135 words)

 

Leaked first hand information indicated a couple teams were highly interested in drafting Rhynex in the Season 73 VHLM draft. There were rumours of Rhynex being picked as early as the 3rd round of Season 73 VHLM draft, which would be a great achievement given how new to the amateur professional Hockey environment Rhynex is in. But with a name like Rhynex Entertainment, he is bound to provide plentiful of "Entertainment" throughout his first VHLM season and he years to come! (81 words)

 

Alas, the draft has come and gone and a couple of surprises to be noted for Rhynex Entertainment. Skipped by teams multiple times and finally being drafted by General Manager ColeMrtz of the Mississauga Hounds in the 5th Round, 55th Overall of the Season 73 VHLM draft. Two rumoured teams that were interested in the young prospect had end up skipping on this future stud, but to be drafted 5-55 is a major accomplishment in this young man's hockey career! Just when you can feel comfortable in putting on a team jersey, Rhynex Entertainment saw on the big screen TV announcing a trade. Rhynex Entertainments stint in Mississauga has ended just like that, traded for the 57th overall selection James Bond and to the Las Vegas Aces. What a turnaround! A massive trade of incredible names! With this we saw the end of the draft with no further movement. This can only be a start of a wonderful long hockey career for Rhynex Entertainment and definitely a player to watch in the upcoming 73rd Season.  (175 words)

 

With training camp and contract negotiations coming up for the young center from Canada, things are definitely going to be a buzz. Let's see how much this kid will play in his first season in VHLM, but one thing is for certain, this youngster known as Rhynex Entertainment will be an important player in a supporting role for the Las Vegas Aces in the present and coming future. (68 words)

 

Total word count: 48 + 135 + 81 + 175 + 68 = 507

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review: interesting article, good set up but if anything lacking a bit of style, a picture or two or using more bold words just to separate it each section. Still you you did divide it up which is always appreciated as it makes it an easier read. Good overview of the player's experience in the VHL so far and even before then, and the excitement of the draft and trade. Overall a solid media spot that is a good read, just could use a bit more in terms of construction. 7/10

3 minutes ago, ROOKIE745 said:

review: interesting article, good set up but if anything lacking a bit of style, a picture or two or using more bold words just to separate it each section. Still you you did divide it up which is always appreciated as it makes it an easier read. Good overview of the player's experience in the VHL so far and even before then, and the excitement of the draft and trade. Overall a solid media spot that is a good read, just could use a bit more in terms of construction. 7/10

 

Thanks for the review! This first my first ever Media Spot, good to hear some quality feedback ?

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