I personally think that the VHL This Weeks just had TOO much info and was a daunting wall of text (to me, at least).
I think a more reduced structure, where not EVERYTHING is covered every week... Like maybe only go over trades/roster moves at mid-point of season or trade deadline, that kind of thing.
I also think reducing more things to point-forum/bullet-points as opposed to paragraph(s) of text would make it easier to digest.
With that being said, I think you did a great job for VHL This Week and despite it being like a wall-of-text, I still found myself reading through them, when they were posted.