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  1. The draft Shawn: We pick for our next pick in the fourth round Aurora Skylight Aurora Skylight was happy she was going to be in halifax,the other gm,s looked confused and thought its a gamble of life Aurora grap her shirt put it on and grap the head and put it on and hug Shawn hard and said thank you. After the draft Interviewer: how did you come here Music start playing Aurora Skylight: Take your passion And make it happen Interviewer: did you saw it coming Music playing Aurora Skylight: Pictures come alive You can dance right through your life Interviewer: where is that music Music playing Aurora Skylight: Now I hear the music Close my eyes, I am rhythm Interviewer: im leaving bye was fun job Aurora was confussed. 2 days later in halifax training ground Shawn: okay we wil vote for our captain and alternatief captain and 2 alternatief captain Groover: okay hello im the assistent gm here js the vote box, and now vote. Groover: new captain is Aurora Skylight, alternatief captain mikko. And the second alternatief captain is Grape. Shawn: wooo Sad shawn he was the only one who did The thing is like the hole story is dis but the begin is now so now lets move again GM and AGM: lets meet the team and we going to train so everyone gear up Aurora was skating on the ice with her C,on her shirt she was skating and happy she said for the first time. Aurora: EVERYONE FORMATION TO ATTACK! the hole arena could hear it the load roar of a captain her wil of the team, the wil of Aurora. Paard looks hears the roar and see his kid on the ice with the C, he never wore. Shawn: Are you crying Paard: shut the fuck up,im not crying im a strong And he tried to wipe it up but stil crys. 4 days later first game,s After game 1 GM and AGM: alright guys we lost but maby next time we wil win Aurora: Yes we just need a good start to the season and try it hard and than harder and become strong next time. Game 2 locker Shawn: WE LOST AGAIN OMG HOW DID WE DO THAT ARE WE LOSERS NO WERE FUCKING NOT LOSER WERE WINNERS BUT YOU GUYS ARE LOSERS. Shawn grappen a water bottel and trows it on the white board the bottel was open and water all over the room. Than Shawn stomp on the white board with red eyes Groover grapped him and send him out to cool off Aurora trys to help the team moral and it sort of works Than a knock on the door it was non other than, a man in a dark suit and said you guys wanna become vhl stars, try to win games and dont try to fail like a loser or you end up like paard. Aurora stands up and said wait til you see my face you you you. The vhl star i thought so and he was gone Word count 522
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  3. I wanna talk about my draft position i get it 4th i could go higher if nothing happend i feel like zoro nothing happend stil gives me chils but i already knew halifax was the only team that wanted the beast the chained beast the monster of the ice. But lets move on why you shouldnt pas on aurora She is good End of the artikel Alright aurora is just good she scores so good let me explaine hockey math Offensief player = goals = more points = more wins = final = win But if we do like with singel players why not a team if you have a good team with her than you Shine on ice Like lets say this youre team is loosing what do you need. A first good player B free agent C Aurora skylight Answer B good job writer Nother qustion How do you take care of Aurora If she is mad ice cream If she is happy talk with her If she is lonley and sad talk to her If she is mad leave her alone Writer note i just wrote what wil help with my gf So that is all you need to know You got a nother qustion stats 50 offensief vision 50 stick handeling All it I hope you get more detail now and one thing she is no free agent she is owned by halifax stays ad halifax after 200 tpe so bag to Shawn but i wouldnt do that Ps: Aurora bites a lot
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  5. Next Day Aurora Skylight things about her love and her relationship with her dad why she loves him as a dad and as a father even he came late in her life, Even he was not on her peewee team watching her, or middelschool, or high school, even the university that she involved. She still feels the love of him as a dad. She ate her break fast and when out to Halifax training ground, she greets everyone and went on to train. Shawn looked ad the ice and looked close to Aurora, and said you know paard Your daughter let me think of someone. And Paard just nicked and watch her train. Bryn yrwn: Everyone we're going to start the training defense you go with Defensive coach Shawn glade, and the centers, wingers, goalies, go with me, and we're going to train hard so LETS GO! Bryn yrwn: okay you guys will shoot the puck ad the goalie and try to score, Goalie don't let a puck in. Aurora Skylight was shooting the pucks but nothing when in, even the other guys' puck went not in. Cocky Halifax player that thinks he is cool: Why did you not play like this in the play-offs loser Team was laughing Aurora was mad and said why didn't you score more. Team: Ooooo And a brawl was out the team try to stop, and it Luckily did. After the training bryn ask Aurora if she needs to come to the office. Aurora when to the office Aurora:WHAT Shawn:Why were you mad Bryn and paard: yes why Aurora: he was a Fing asshole he doesn't belong to play hockey Aurora left with anger slam the door and change and went to the locker room after the boys. Shawn:She is like you paard every way with her personal tie passive aggressive mostly, but sometime’s physical. Paard: nah she isn't she is not that like me, I was a rebel. Bryn: she is like you bud Paard: F u fing guys Shawn and Bryn: told ya Paard: I see it my self now SHIT! Aurora later in the day need it to go home and put her make up on for the VHLM draft news Reporter: so Aurora skylight in the draft hype for you people thought first you are going to be a good 4 round picks of your university career and not a U18 league Aurora:yes what do you mean by that Reporter:because now if your good season and okay play off run you skyrocket the draft place. Aurora:Uhm nah I don't think, so there are a lot of other great players, in the VHLM draft class of 89/90 Reporter: thanks for you're time Aurora Skylight was nice talking Aurora:THX with you to Next Day in training Shawn:AURORA! Here is our new psychologists, just for your anger issues Aurora:WHAT NO I DON'T NEED IT REALLY And she when on training after training she went to Shawn Aurora:Next season I'm maybe not going here because its basically 1/8 opportunity I join Halifax even if I love it here my hometown. When she was home that Day she looked ad her mailbox and saw a letter. I'm Skating on Ice, woooah I'm Skating on Ice, woooah I'm Skating on Ice, woooah And doesn't it feel good! While singing And she saw a letter of her mom and see whent back to her appartement. And read the note. My dear dochter im secretley daling youre father paard and i hope youre okay with that, I just wanna say keep it a secret but i first wanna know if youre okay with it because, Youre my lil acedent and i love you, He wanna contect me first than we talked and talked, than the next time he kissed me than we dating again, and now were a couple i hope youre not mad about it. Love you mom Aurora Skylight was confused what she just read, What wil she do next 666 words
  6. Do youre best on Aurora Skylight just do youre thing what you want on it
  7. What a cool design its art for real
  8. Aurora Skylight was born by a singel mom, she didnt tell her that paard was her father til she was 17, her mom had almost no money but in secret she had contacted, paard to pay for aurora hockey junior cursus, Aurora was in love with hockey by her home town team halifax she grew up in a geto hood, but she saw the Light she played for Halifax pee wee team, with te red and black jersey she drives of talent, she was allways the small one but she was good and amazing her body was not the talk, more her skill as a 11 year old, when her training was done she was right to her mom job, sailors bar ad the docks Pee wee stats 25 games,12 goals,36 assist After she whent to middel school Ad the age of 14 she joins the team as the fourth line center, she joins them for 2 years where she destroyed the teams but she was bullied, for her poor staanders and her hair and her clothes, but her anger was she letting out by singing and hockey. When she was 15 she was a first liner and scored lot of goals and assist made but her home issues, was making her weakker from the outside and more mean people where mean to her, but she saw Light, when she was done after training she whent to the bar, looking for her mom but than she saw her mom not anymore, she was ad the hospital, after a sailor punched her hard and knock-out her on in to a coma, was her lonley month she couldnt aford health care and the bils in the same time, but than she was taken away by a cop because she couldnt take care of her self and she sleept ad the cops house, for a bid, after 15 days she heard only good thing her bils and hospital care is payed by a unknown guy and the sailor got to prison after asult ad a private place, she was crying after her mom wake up, she whent to her house again and her mom had a good time she didnt stress, ad her school everyone heard the story, she was more bullied by the bully,s, when she was sitting alone she ad lunch she starved a lil bit and looked ad the girls and boys eating, her pi coach came next to her and smilled and gave her a sandwich and sit next to her and eat with her. Stats 50 games,54 goals,29 assist 16 year old She got a letter, the letter from halifax universitey she was happy she had a change to be the youngest player ever to play for them, and she can start first game against universitey of toronto, her mom accepted it and she allso and whent to the campus with the other girls 99% where 18 year best people in her team, she played so well that her that she was big town news. Her season was so fun and good, she had everything that she can imagine she was fun in the class made friends for the first time she felt save and she felt good her life was wonderfull, her first game was amazing against toronto. Aurora with the puck she blast after the puck with her speed and skill she race to the goal and trys to shoot and its a goal the over time goal what a wonder full night for her and the school is partying. Aurora never whent to party's because she doesnt want to get drinking and slept after the game, next Day of training she trained harder because she relized after getting the letter that she can be a star and play ad the vhlm or vhle or vhl even if she is Lucky, with talent and luck, when her season was done she made it look strong, ad the vhlm clubs already try to swoop her in. When she was 17 her last season she came was playing a game and heard a old professional star is watching the game, and she made her point that she was amazing and she played more than her best she played like it her fans last time to watch, she was allways in her mind i wil do my best no matter what my fans maby watch me for the first time and only time so i need to make it my all, and after the game. Paard came to her and wanted a talk with her, after couple hours she knew that he was her father and her Savior with the bills and everything, she knew allso she was never ment to be born and that she was thinking that her father run away, but no most thinks was a lie, but she thanked paard because of his support with out him she couldnt play hockey ad a high level as now. 50 games,66 goals,25 assist I hope you guys love this story so far now you know her origins
  9. This is the scout report of Aurora Skylight Back story: read my parts but to make it short she was a, lil acedent to be born her father paard did not knew it never in his entaire life only before he retired and now she is taking the mental and hard life of a pro. She is a good shooter ad the moment 84 tpe, But her best atribute is scooring,20 tpe spend on it and that makes it 48. She is allso good with her passing as it is 46 and she is a good play maker with a good passing eye. She is a strong skater to she can skate and she got good strenght as well both are very good but, skating is 44 and strenght 46. Her best abilitys atleast what im now going to type about is her bad abilitys, of the game of hockey Is puck handeling she got a 42 tpe, and that is her only real bad tpe thing but its allright she inproves it quite a bid every time Vhlm games and play offs allso in one So in Total 10 games inclusief playoffs,2 goals,4 assist,6 points,(+/-)-3,shooting 13,penalty min 2,hits 20,sp 1,powerplay goal 1. That is pretty agressief 20 hits in 10 games like 2 hits a game. She was not real a goal scorer but i think because she was ad the fourth line, and not on the third or second, And she was allso on the defensief line, Not really offensief. What do i look to upgrade her mostly every time as atributes. Stick handeling Slap shot Wrist shot Offensief vision Defensief courage Those are my top thinks i look to upgrade every week some time i upgrade the other things. Like Poke checking Dekking Face offs Those where every thing i mostly and sometimes upgrade And i just relized i made a goon a inforcer. That is funny her height and wheight are. 5,5&140 She is tiny and Light. She is 18 and ready to get scouted, by top vhlm teams she is good tpe earner,10 or 12 tpe per week,a real good earner. I hope i made a good clearing, who aurora skylight is, as a player and as a person she is a alr player for the vhlm more like a 5/10 draft prospect, not a franchise star really have a nice Day. Words Total 405
  10. Yeah i swear i thought hounds wil win it but nah but now i hope the kings wil lose to philly but like allso with it was nail bitting i was like who is going to win hounds or philly but now i wanna see philly to destroy the kings allso like you guys attack is Un real out of the blue amazing you guys can win it and o hope it you guys got allso a good defence solid and the goalie amazing asf This for sure you guys wil win it
  11. The philly have a amzing run now like the finale i thought that halifax would win it til game 7 but you guys destroyed them and aurora and with the hounds i had them as favoriets but it was a big surprise but now with kings you guys need to win it philly all for it this is philly season and we wil sing honey im lonley in the penalty box the philly song from the 80/90 but im rooting for the reapers
  12. Okay so lets talk about the point of this like what i wanna tell you guys is this the play offs of the vhlm like sad i cant make a fairytail of halifax no sad to see but now with the finale philly v kings like i hope the kings wil fail idk why i hate the franchise with all my hart dont know why cant remeber, but philly i hope you lose the finale 2 like i dont know the reapers come on my dyslexie reads the r***s or rappers depends my brain doing its a bad word but like love the logo of philly, Kings logo ugly a** design i swear i can make a better one give me paper i wil make it cool, location philly good place geto asf but its cool, Mexico city that place sounds like a desert and gangs that are called kings and queens and jokers and like more Mexican gangs name here is one the pineappels good name for a gang okay philly gangs name i wil say, Lowriders, ,thugs, daddys, miks, bad names point to kings. Kings There the toronto mapel leafs of vhlm and that is why i hate them Philly There the okay team like there a team that are mid not high About the 2 teams kings it allways is there the kings allways play offs most of the times Philly soms time shit some times good mostly wildcard in my opinion and like there the same wildcard as halifax 21st I hope you guys know why i hate kings and why i think about the 2 teams fun writing
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  14. I love the story like i imaginaire it in to a movie like a happy ending and than said under neat the end wait for part 2 the call up and i love how it basicley said that he was stressed because he wants to play for malmo and that is just baiscley make me feal i read about a real player not a fake player like he is or she is or they is real and the part of the janitor like its sort of funny and i imagine a janitor a old man with Grey outfit and a white mustach and long white hair like the guy from pyscho or something idk know the movie but keep it up i wanna read more
  15. So the draft is coming probley she is going to be 4 or 5 or 6 but that is my thinkingkf her draft she is good she got good tpe grinding so i think she is going tk make a big diffrence with her draft and what it going to be with the story part like part 5 is probaly the draft and i got 2 things, for the story 1 she is going to be drafted by halifax or hounds why i wanna do like that the 2 teams are intrested in her and that thry want her so much because they see her hidin talent so good 2 if she get drafted by a other team i wanna make that she going to learn about the sport life and that she need to leave her family and more drama But that is what i want what do you guys wanna see in part 5 basicley the draft after the play offs if im right or is it something els is there allso a Junior show case Tournament or not probaly not after the play offs and the cub final it going to be fast but the vhlm is going to be so hard after the draft we got so many great players aurora is er about 2 week in and she is 68 tpe soon 71 or 72 idk but she hits hard with the And that is what i love about her she is a hard working player that can be great
  16. The junior show case would be a good story i wil try to take inspirtion of the mighty ducks world cub
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  18. Aurora is in the line up she was happy she was dancing and screaming with Joy than after 15 minutes she left the ficelity and thinking im im ad the vhlm line up and i can now be a star and hopefully i can stil get drafted by them it would be a great season now the play offs run and i can get a Vhlm cub Ring but right before she whent to the metro station she saw a car a nice car a man step out of the car it was non other than Vincent the vhl rookie and a vhlm gm he said hallo and said hop on my car and aurora with zero trust just hop on and than drive with her and what Vincent talked was about, Was more like how the hounds would be a perfect team for her. Vincent: We the hounds are a good team we can create you as the best version of you in hockey, And we can help you with the state of the art training ground. Aurora: i wil think about it but my hart is in halifax we maby got training ground that be broken or not working, but we got a hart as a team as a fan so my Answer is be first to draft me. And than Vincent brought her home and she just whent home and than the next Day,Aurora Skylight saw her idol a old player last played in season 80 and it was Bryn Yrwy he is now halifax trainer. And whent on talking with with Aurora she thought he would talk about the best english vhlm player Sjin how he helpt him to become a pro. But no he talked about what Vincent told her. Bryn: Look Aurora you are a great player bit youre allso a great talent and i wanna tell you can leave halifax for more of a futuristic team. But we in halifax wil never forget you,can leave but i know you.dont want it youre a loyal player and i trust you with it. Aurora was just silent and said her thanks for the advice than left, for training she was stressing out making mistakes but than she picked her self up. When the training was done she saw the Vhl news Reporter: Today ad the minor league play offs, young bright talent Aurora Skylight she was just seen with Vincent the hounds gm, What could that be and now back to VHLE. Shawn ear was hearing that to ask Aurora to come to his office Shawn:you wanna leave for the hounds or he just talked about why you should wanna go to the hounds and leave Canada Aurora: Sir i dont wanna leave halifax i wanna stay her but the draft is a 15% to go to halifax the point is he brought me home we talked about it and he left. Shawn: Okay I.. Than right before Shawn could speak paard walked in Paard:Shawn let me take it over, i know how the feeling is to leave youre club youre team you wanna join i know it, it hurts but it is a point in a woman career or a man career to accepted it, why because we are like puppets to the public Shawn: that is True what youre dad said Aurora: i get okay thanks And than she screams when she was home and than Let it go, let it go Can't hold it back anymore Let it go, let it go Turn away and slam the door I don't care what they're going to say Let the storm rage on The career never bothered me anyway It's funny how some distance makes everything seem small And the fears that once controlled me can't get to me at all It's time to see what I can do To test the limits and break through No right, no wrong, no rules for me I'm free Than she was falling on the ground and cried about her career what her choich is and what not her choich is the world of the vhlm draft prospect is hard what she thinks it is just so crazy, She grap her skate board and just whent on skateboarding doing ollies and making grind on the street and thinks about how she can be great. When she was home she was watching tv than got a call from her dad Paard:Are you okay my dear dochter Aurora:yes Paard:i know how are right now Aurora:NO YOU DONT KNOW ANYTHING ABOUT ME WE KNOW EACH OTHER FOR 1 YEAR, YOURE MY DAD WHERE THE F ARE YOU WHEN I WHENT WAS BORN KID! Paard was in shock and hang up and after 13 min he was ad her door step and talked with her, He explained to her that her mom and Paard where drinken and she was a one night stand. He did not know because they did not saw each other for a long time becuase it was a one night stand, And if he knew it he would be on her side for the rest of her upbringing but no. Than she hugged her dad so tight and cried on his shoulder Now what wil happen to the vhlm prospect and her draft team aka the first step of becoming a real hockey star the born canadian what wil happen to her career wil she end up like her, or like a new star that everyone going to wanna see If you wanna be in the paardivers just comment and ask why you wanna be in there i wil conect you and than you are allso in the univers about the vhlm and vhle and the vhl it is a fun idea of my I hope you guys love the drama of Aurora Skylight i hope so Thanks for the support guys and i love the comments and support with the views and like and Fires and woahs and more omg real thanks you guys are the best love you all 1000 words i can claim it for 2 weeks 21 and 28 only those weeks because it was post on 21 this was a edit
  19. Again a nice job speech less
  20. You are so good in making this omg it look amazing the detail the art omg just no words
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