The second chapter of Baby Bob's life

[Baby Boomer 727]

Hello everyone,

 

Welcome to the second chapter of Baby Bob’s life story. In this life story we will talk about the life of Baby, when he was young, his thoughts and his impressions before the drafts, during the seasons and during the playoffs. Baby Bob will also respond to questions from the fans, from the GMs and from the leaders of the VHL and the VHLM. In this chapter we will talk about his impressions and his feelings before the draft and where he hopes to play and with who.

 

Baby Bob will be drafted in the S78 VHLM draft and in the S79 VHL draft, because the scouts only started to notice him after the trade deadline so he could not be drafted in the S78 VHL draft. As soon as the scouts of the VHLM noticed him, they started to contact him to make him play with them for the rest of the season and maybe for the playoffs. After four very good offers, Baby decided to finally sign with the Mexico City Kings. Advantage, the Gm of the team, and Baby Bob had some really good talk and Advantage helped him a lot and gave him a lot of advice to know how the league works and to become a good player. Because the team wasn't having a good season, they didn’t make the playoffs so Baby only played two games where he didn’t get any points, but was +1 and had one shot on goal and one block shot. At the end of the season, Baby Bob was released by the team, because of the upcoming draft. After his extraordinary season in the QMJHL and his two games with the Mexico City Kings, Baby Bob has been approached by four teams of the VHLM for the S78 draft, the Philadelphia Reapers, the Yukon Rush, the Houston Bulls and finally the Mississauga Hounds. He had good conversations with all the teams and he would be very happy to play for all of them. The VHLM draft is Sunday, May 16th at 8:30 EDT, so Baby still has time to be approached by other teams. Baby Bob will probably be a second or a third round pick due to his late arrival under the radar of the scouts and his inexperience in the league. No matter which team drafts him, Baby Bob will be very happy to help them be a good team during the season and a contendant for the Founders Cup. The only thing Baby really wants is ice-time, he doesn’t really care about where he will play, whether it is on a fourth line or a second line, he wants to play and have time to develop himself. It is sure that he has goals, he wants to be better and be a big player in the VHLM and eventually in the VHL. For the team who will draft him, I can assure you that you did the biggest steal of your life and that you won’t regret it. Baby is very invested in his teams and he learns fast. So, I wish you a good draft and I hope that you will think about Baby when it will be your time to select.

 

Thanks for reading and see you next week for more of the life story of Baby Bob.

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[Prout 373]

Review; you could break up your big paragraph abit. Work on some spacing as it’s just all connected. I like seeing the interest into the draft and making storylines for your player as it’s always fun to follow along other peoples players and what all they’ve done. Keep writing and keep up the good work! 7/10

[Crstats23 340]

Review good article with interesting information, but please break it up so it’s not just a “wall” of text, a picture would have been nice too, can’t wait to see you write more, and maybe stop having everything in bold maybe just the title

 

rating 8/10

[KaleebtheMighty 1,509]

I like the aspect of this article! It's neat to see a weekly chapter in the life of a player as they move up in the VHLM (and hopefully the VHL!). You go a little into your initial start in the VHLM as well as your next steps. If anything, the spacing or separation in this article could use a little work. Having everything bolded doesn't help my eyes read easily, and I think an addition of a paragraph using what you already have in this article would also help. But a great read, and I'm looking forward to seeing where you end up in the VHLM!

Score: 7.5/10