gorlab 4,321 Posted January 23, 2015 Share Posted January 23, 2015 (edited) Edited January 23, 2015 by gorlab Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/16614-claimedjbcs-final-56/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frank 5,209 Posted January 23, 2015 Share Posted January 23, 2015 happening Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/16614-claimedjbcs-final-56/#findComment-174318 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack 498 Posted January 23, 2015 Share Posted January 23, 2015 Effort: 2/2 - Yeah for sure. Look: 2.25/3 - Not feeling the 1px border, probably would have been better without it. Try to bring the text closer to the render, it feels lost so far away. Interesting render placement and choice, but it is kind of cool. Effects are pretty cool, but the contrast of the pink to the dark blue of the render is a bit off. Keep at it. Creativity: 1/1 - Definitely. Total: 5.25/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/16614-claimedjbcs-final-56/#findComment-174427 Share on other sites More sharing options...
solas 1,951 Posted January 24, 2015 Share Posted January 24, 2015 Effort: 2/2 - Render, text, stock work, easily enough. Look: 2.5/3 - I like the concept behind this - the falling effect has the potential to work really well. However, I agree with Jackim on the border and color, I'd say removing the border and making the color a bit more consistent might work better. Also, I personally think there's a bit too much empty space - maybe adjust the canvas to be a bit shorter as far as height goes to take a bit off from the top, and move the text closer to the render. Creativity: 1/1 Total: 5.5/6 FINAL GRADE: 5/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/16614-claimedjbcs-final-56/#findComment-174584 Share on other sites More sharing options...
CoachReilly 688 Posted February 2, 2015 Share Posted February 2, 2015 Claimed Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/16614-claimedjbcs-final-56/#findComment-178006 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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