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Effort: 2/2 - Yeah you got it all.

 

Look: 2.25/3 - First off, you're colouring and colour scheme is great. The whole piece fits together nicely in that respect. A few things are holding this back though. The text isn't great, try to use a simpler font, and keep all of the text either upper or lowercase. Next the blending/stocks kind of distract from the render. Mainly the light coming from the top right. It hides the render a little bit. Good work though, keep it up!

 

Creativity: 1/1 - Yep

 

Total: 5.25/6

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Effort: 2/2 - Definitely enough effort here.

Look: 2.25/3 - I agree with what Jackim said, but I'd like to add a couple things. Personally I kinda like the stock work, but one adjustment I'd make would be to maybe tweak the opacity of the stock in the upper right a tad and move it to the left side of the render to add some lighting. As far as the text goes, I'd personally go for an italic, simple (maybe sans serif) font.

Creativity: 1/1

Total: 5.25/6

FINAL GRADE: 5/6

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