Frank 5,209 Posted November 14, 2015 Share Posted November 14, 2015 Due to the fact I won't have access to my laptop for that week... Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/25541-claimedhines-nov-16-22-final6/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissioner Beketov 9,025 Posted November 15, 2015 Commissioner Share Posted November 15, 2015 Giving this a bump so it doesn't get buried Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/25541-claimedhines-nov-16-22-final6/#findComment-286876 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissioner Beketov 9,025 Posted November 16, 2015 Commissioner Share Posted November 16, 2015 Effort 2/2: I can really see the effort you put into this piece. Look 2.5/3: Render effects are good, text is great, BG is pretty good. I would like to see the yellow stripe in the BG as a different colour (red to match the render maybe?) and I'm not sure how I feel about the ghosting around the render / how blown out the text looks. A few tweaks on a curves layer could really make your lighting pop and bring this thing up to perfection. Very well done though. Creativity 1/1: Yep. Overall 5.5/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/25541-claimedhines-nov-16-22-final6/#findComment-287186 Share on other sites More sharing options...
boubabi 4,725 Posted November 17, 2015 Share Posted November 17, 2015 (edited) Effort 2/2: You've never come up with very complex stuff, but it works alright. Look 2.5/3: Too much different tones going on. The red from the jersey, then the bright yellow in the background, then the blue out of nowwhere. You could fix that honestly. Some part of the font is over contrasted and some effects too. Creativity 1/1: Okay, it's your style. Overall 5.5/6 Final : 6/6 Edited November 17, 2015 by boubabi Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/25541-claimedhines-nov-16-22-final6/#findComment-287356 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kendrick 4,741 Posted November 23, 2015 Share Posted November 23, 2015 Claimed Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/25541-claimedhines-nov-16-22-final6/#findComment-288844 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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