gorlab 4,321 Posted December 13, 2015 Share Posted December 13, 2015 Will 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/26390-claimeddec-7-13-22/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
boubabi 4,725 Posted December 14, 2015 Share Posted December 14, 2015 As I told you in the gfx section (I think), I would have changed the color of either the render of the efx. I don't think green and orange match well together. Font and the render placement is great, so nothing to say here. The canvas size is interesting too, I like it. Good job on it. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/26390-claimeddec-7-13-22/#findComment-293271 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissioner Beketov 9,025 Posted December 29, 2015 Commissioner Share Posted December 29, 2015 Definitely agree on the weird colour combination. Maybe try getting that green to be a light shade of blue or something and tone down the orange a tad, could work. I love the effects on the render but the lighting could be a tad stronger. In a similar vein, I love the effects on the Sleeman text but the John seems slapped on and unnecessary. Overall, this piece looks very well done but a tad unfinished. A few extra layers could have really made this thing pop. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/26390-claimeddec-7-13-22/#findComment-296490 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kesler 1,514 Posted December 30, 2015 Share Posted December 30, 2015 Claimed Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/26390-claimeddec-7-13-22/#findComment-296691 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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