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I can see what you're going for but it's definitely very basic right now. The BG is a little bland, the stock work is decent but not done quite enough and the lighting is non-existent. All those things will come ion time, just keep practicing with different stocks and different settings. I'd also like to see the text get closer to the render; it'll make sure to bring the eye to the right spot rather than draw it away.

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  • Beketov changed the title to Goody [1/2]

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There some good technique going on. You started blending your render and texture together, witch is nice. I think the font should be closer to the render and a light source a bit stronger.

Practice makes perfect, continue ! 

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