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Got some good element here, but could use a few improvements. First, everything is a bit too dark, try to keep it a little bit brighter on the render and in the background. The render is also out of focus, just adding a sharpen filter on top would help that. Stock work is cool, but I'd like to see a bit more of it. Keep it up.

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Jack covered most stuff. The BG being so black really gives the whole piece an odd contrast and lack of depth so try to not make things quite so dark. Not sure if the render you chose was out of focus or if something happens to it but render should definitely be in focus. Text is pretty good but is taking the focus point away from the render because it's brighter. Work on your lighting I'd say and this could be a lot better.

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Everything about the background has been said. The small stroke on the render is bothering, so you blend the edges a little bit more to cover that. The font is cool, very avenger ish. The bottom texture on the right, near the render, should be on total opacity for a better effect. Looking gud nonetheless 

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