jack 498 Posted February 21, 2016 Share Posted February 21, 2016 STZ 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/28362-claimedthree-22/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissioner Beketov 9,095 Posted February 22, 2016 Commissioner Share Posted February 22, 2016 An odd lace to start but I'm going to start by saying the focus on his face is sharp as a damn tack which is perfect. BG is a little weird but working with colour made it work really well I find. Lighting could be doing a BIT more but overall it works very well. My main issue is the text. To put it bluntly, I don't like it that much. I feel like it has too much weird ones and colours going on that make it feels like a cheesy 90's commercial. Maybe if the blue was more subtle or you used the red from the BG instead of blue it would have worked but it's throwing the piece off (for me) as is. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/28362-claimedthree-22/#findComment-314066 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack 498 Posted February 25, 2016 Author Share Posted February 25, 2016 bump @boubabi Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/28362-claimedthree-22/#findComment-314940 Share on other sites More sharing options...
boubabi 4,725 Posted February 25, 2016 Share Posted February 25, 2016 The lighting is looking pretty good. The font is different, I like it. The colors are real nice, and the blur is well done. Good job Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/28362-claimedthree-22/#findComment-314952 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kesler 1,514 Posted March 2, 2016 Share Posted March 2, 2016 Claimed Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/28362-claimedthree-22/#findComment-316679 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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