scoop 3,432 Posted May 16, 2016 Share Posted May 16, 2016 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/30424-claimeddelariva-reviewed/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
boubabi 4,725 Posted May 16, 2016 Share Posted May 16, 2016 street getting back on the tpe whoring way, which is good. The font is good, but again, the background payttern is kinda disturbing it. Some part is real sharp, on some other is blurred, so that could be fix. good job otherwise. Not huge on the background pattern but the render area is looking good Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/30424-claimeddelariva-reviewed/#findComment-339553 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissioner Beketov 9,026 Posted May 17, 2016 Commissioner Share Posted May 17, 2016 I agree with Boubabi that the dragon scale BG you have going on is a bit distracting. If it was uniform in it's focus I think it would be fine but the blurring almost seems random. I think using it as a clipping mask on the text was a poor choice as it showcases this problem more than necessary. Lighting and contrast is decent though which you've vastly improved on in the last few weeks. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/30424-claimeddelariva-reviewed/#findComment-339792 Share on other sites More sharing options...
CowboyinAmerica 2,890 Posted May 17, 2016 Share Posted May 17, 2016 Claimed Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/30424-claimeddelariva-reviewed/#findComment-340044 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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