gregreg 930 Posted May 18, 2016 Share Posted May 18, 2016 Phil 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/30487-claimedworth-so-much-reviewed/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phil 5,119 Posted May 18, 2016 Share Posted May 18, 2016 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/30487-claimedworth-so-much-reviewed/#findComment-340555 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kesler 1,514 Posted May 19, 2016 Share Posted May 19, 2016 Claimed Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/30487-claimedworth-so-much-reviewed/#findComment-340687 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissioner Beketov 9,025 Posted May 19, 2016 Commissioner Share Posted May 19, 2016 You really like making the text the focus, I get that and it's fine, but you need to get more lighting on the render so that it doesn't just become a BG piece. The text is so vibrantly white here and the render doesn't stand out much at all, even with the green. Get some nice light on his face. Nice subtle use of the BG text and the stock work does a good job of creating depth. Text is a little bright as I said but otherwise works relatively well. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/30487-claimedworth-so-much-reviewed/#findComment-340742 Share on other sites More sharing options...
701 309 Posted May 23, 2016 Share Posted May 23, 2016 I actually like your style of making the text the main focus. Though, the lighting should help the text, well honestly the whole signature needs some good lighting. That's the only thing I see holding this signature back. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/30487-claimedworth-so-much-reviewed/#findComment-342123 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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